Okay... just one more part

Thanks for all the feedback from the first two parts. I appreciate it!

I hope you like Part 3.


~NICOLE

You are absolutely cruel to end here! You've gotta post again soon...later tonight? Tomorrow? I love this story and you are doing such a good job describing Clark's feelings. I am glad though that Rachel may not get as hurt as I thought she would.

Excellent, excellent section, Nicole! But where did that extra part come from? I could have sworn that this was supposed to be the final one!

Not that I really mind. All the more to enjoy!

Good to see that Lois is finally coming to her senses. But what is she going to do about it? And as for Clark... he's being very loyal, even while knowing that their friendship is over. Poor guy!

Just a thought, by the way... you might want to rethink this line, which kind of struck me in a way you may not have intended:




Wendy

Hey.. thanks Sheila and Wendy for the speedy feedback!

Wendy... I did add an extra part... I tried to be sly, by editing my old posts to work w/ the adjustment, lol... but I knew it would be noticed In the end, it was WAY too long to post in one section. But it's all done now so there will not be any more tricks.

And as for the line you mentioned: LOL I honestly didn't get it right away. I read the comment and wondered if it was a grammatical thing, or wording arrangement, structure problem... I just did not get it. Then I walked away to copy something and was like "Oh!" (which got me a few strange looks from those in my ear shot). Clearly I am dense! It's been changed to "slipped through your fingers". Thanks

And Sheila, in answer to your question... I'll post the rest tomorrow

~NICOLE

I really liked that line! Interesting mental picture.

I can't wait until tomorrow. Although, I think you should post both parts tonight since the story should have been done today. But I still can't wait till tomorrow.

~Kristen

I can't believe you kept us hanging here!!! I too, thought that this was the final part but no complaints though, I just love this story. Can't even find a favorite quote since all's been written well!

I'll try to wait patiently until tommorrow for your (final

Hi,

Great part. Get back here!


More ASAP, please.

MAF

ahhh!

I keep hitting refresh - I hope against logic that part 4 will suddenly appear!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm enjoying this so much! (I just read 1-3)

Nicole

An excellent part! Please post it ASAP.

Tricia

Aieeeeee! How can you leave it hanging there? I want the conclusion right now!

OHHHHHHHHhhhh I feel so sorry for Clark.........he's just soooooo lost

I need part 4 right now or else u r punish! Lol

Great job!

Looking forward for pt 4

Wow... tough crowd! I knew I'd hear some words over my breaking the last part up into two parts, lol. Okay, a quick read-over of the final part and last min. editing, and it's up...


Thanks for the feedback everyone!! I really appreciate it!

~NICOLE

Poor Clark! Poor Lois! Next part ASAP!!!

Andreia