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Poor Clark! Now the challenge will be for Lucy to not decide to throw the bet to get her turn...

Really cute!

Mike

Cute story. I wonder what Lois' reaction would be to watching Lucy kiss Clark. Maybe it would help make up her mind where Clark is concerned. I bet she wouldn't mind losing more and more if a kiss was the ante, but only with Clark. I can picture her competitive streak coming back with a vengeance if the kissee were Jimmy or Ralph.

Sarah

Cute! So the real loser is Clark?

Just to be evil, Lucy should up the ante so the loser has to kiss Clark... Double or nothing... ie. twice as long the next time! Lot of fun, LLF!

Cute story. I felt sorry for Clark, though, when he realized why Lois was kissing him. It's one thing to know a kiss is staged for the purposes of being undercover, but another entirely to think that a kiss is real, and then to find out that it was given as a punishment for losing a bet. I hope he at least has suspicions that there may be some real feelings behind the kiss, as well.

Joy,
Lynn

Loved it!

I, as of now, am hoping Lois continues to loose any and all bets with Lucy in the foreseeable future

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Great story

Laura

What an adorable little story! Who knew that losing could be so much fun!? I think Lois is going to be losing every bet she can think of from now on.

I do worry about Clark though, knowing that he's kind of just being used here. But maybe it'll help him seize the opportunity to gather some courage and ask Lois out.

Great short story. Now all it needs is a sequel where Lois loses a bet and Lucy makes her tell her how she found out that Clark and Superman are one and the same or one where Clark and Lucy make a bet.......

Ha! Lois might put up a fight, but she will be happy to lose any bet where the loser kisses Clark. Fun happy story!

Thanks for the comments, everyone.

Originally Posted by Mike M

Poor Clark! Now the challenge will be for Lucy to not decide to throw the bet to get her turn...

Really cute!

Mike

There's a definite possibility that Lucy might want to throw the next bet to get her own turn...

Originally Posted by sarah

Cute story. I wonder what Lois' reaction would be to watching Lucy kiss Clark. Maybe it would help make up her mind where Clark is concerned. I bet she wouldn't mind losing more and more if a kiss was the ante, but only with Clark. I can picture her competitive streak coming back with a vengeance if the kissee were Jimmy or Ralph.

Sarah

Her competitive streak would most definitely return if the bet involved kissing Jimmy or Ralph.

Originally Posted by VirginiaR

Cute! So the real loser is Clark?

Just to be evil, Lucy should up the ante so the loser has to kiss Clark... Double or nothing... ie. twice as long the next time! Lot of fun, LLF!

Kissing twice as long would definitely be twice as fun for the loser.

Originally Posted by Lynn S. M.

Cute story. I felt sorry for Clark, though, when he realized why Lois was kissing him. It's one thing to know a kiss is staged for the purposes of being undercover, but another entirely to think that a kiss is real, and then to find out that it was given as a punishment for losing a bet. I hope he at least has suspicions that there may be some real feelings behind the kiss, as well.

Joy,
Lynn

I felt a little sorry for Clark myself, but I believe he might suspect that there are some real feelings behind the kisses eventually.

Originally Posted by LMA

Loved it!

I, as of now, am hoping Lois continues to loose any and all bets with Lucy in the foreseeable future

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Great story

Laura

If Lois has her way, I'm sure she will continue to lose any and all bets with Lucy.

Originally Posted by Deadly Chakram

What an adorable little story! Who knew that losing could be so much fun!? I think Lois is going to be losing every bet she can think of from now on.

I do worry about Clark though, knowing that he's kind of just being used here. But maybe it'll help him seize the opportunity to gather some courage and ask Lois out.

Yes, this does open the door for Clark to use this as an opportunity to ask Lois out.

Originally Posted by Suggs_With_A_Box

Great short story. Now all it needs is a sequel where Lois loses a bet and Lucy makes her tell her how she found out that Clark and Superman are one and the same or one where Clark and Lucy make a bet.......

A Clark and Lucy bet sounds like a fun idea for a sequel.

Originally Posted by Morgana

Ha! Lois might put up a fight, but she will be happy to lose any bet where the loser kisses Clark. Fun happy story!

Yes, any fight that Lois puts up is not to be believed. She'll definitely enjoy losing, no matter what she may claim.

Hi Lois_Lane_Fan!

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"I want you to give Clark Kent a big kiss on the lips. At least five seconds long!" Lucy ordered her sister.

Huh. What’s up there…? Did she figure out he’s got a secret identity?

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"If you don't like it, too bad. This is what you get for making a bet and saying that the winner gets to decide the punishment of the loser," Lucy gloated.

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"Fine; fine," Lucy relented. "Then, you have to be my maid for a month. Wash the dishes, scrub the floors, wash my clothes..."

"And how is that any different from our usual arrangement," Lois quipped.

Buuuurrrrrn!

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Clark barely got the words 'good morning' out of his mouth before he found Lois' arms wrapped around him and her face close to his.

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"One... two... three... four... five!" At five, Lois released Clark and turned to Lucy.

"So, Lucy... want to make a bet on the Calvin Harding/Joe Bennett fight?" Lois asked. "I think Harding's gonna wipe the floor with Bennett."

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And while her sister was usually extremely competitive, Lucy was very certain that Lois would be more than fine with being the loser of each and every one of these bets.

CLARK:

Cute one! With an unexpected punch line!

Michael

Thanks for the feedback, Michael. I'm glad you enjoyed the punchline.