Oooh, that is one seriously sick boy.

You did a great job of capturing the sheer weariness of the genuinely ill. But what was that sinister little aside of Lex having tampered with the Kryptonite to make it even *more* deadly? I want to be skeptical about his ability to do so, but then I remember that the guy managed to put a clone of Supes, together, so... :rolleyes:

I was glad to see Lois coming to the rescue so splendidly... once she knew, of course. And go, Martha and Jon! I don't know what we'd do without 'em.

Looking forward to MORE!

Hazel

Missy, a very well set up tease.

You've created the situation where Lois and Clark can be together in a more sympathetic circumstance but then you... tbc us. Not nice.

It will be interesting to see what happens when Clark wakes up, and will Lois still be there. And how can Lois bring up the subject of Superman without causing Clark to clam up and shut her out again.

I'm afraid you are reducing some of Lois' stupid behavior just to heighten Clark's lunkheadedness. I guess these two aren't really meant to be together.

Tank (who figures Lex still has some mischief up his sleeve)

Oooh! Poor Clark! More, more, more! Pleeeease?

Hey Hazel, Tank and Rivka!!

Thanks for the comments! Appreciate you hanging in there!!

More coming up soon!

Missy