Hi,

Great part. I don’t see our Lois accepting Clark proposal that fast, like a desperate woman to cover a hole. She probably prefers to let Clark free to think a make his own decision.

This is not an office conversation and fast decision.

More ASAP, please.

MAF

Anna

I can definitely see Clark telling Lois that he will look after her.

Tricia

Thanks for the opinions, girls! I'll make sure to edit that part a bit when it goes to the Archive.

Part 15 will be up tonight. Thanks for following the story.

See ya,
AnnaBtG.