Wonderous and spellbinding.

Hurt to read.

Amazing. Brilliant. Insightful.

Angst. Which I adore.

My father died 6 months ago after battling cancer. I held his hand as he slipped away, and I'm telling you - your story really hit those emotions spot on. I'm all sore-throated now at the ressurection of the memory.

I think that you can evoke that pain so easily with your words is a testament to your excellent writing skill.

I eagerly await the next segment.

I'm really enjoying this story. Great characterization and writing style!!
Looking forward to more.

Gads...how do *you* do it? I can barely read it without my vision blurring, how do you write this?

That rememberance of his little girls, his babies sitting with him, crying for their mommy...damn...

Okay I can barely get this out. I'm gone, but still reading, awaiting next section.

TEEEEEEJ

Wow. Just... wow. I can't wait for the next installment. Is it Tuesday yet?
Terry

Wow!

gerry

This was so heart wrenching and sad. I am sure all of us can relate to some kind of loss. Certainly this brings some to mind. You have a way of making us feel what they are feeling with your words. Just beautiful. Beautifully done. Laura

Your writing style is just amazing! It took my breath away and leaves me speechless.

This story is so touching and heartbreaking

Hi,

Beautiful!

Diane

WOW! I'm speechless. Please post ASAP.

Tricia

Thanks for all these great comments

It really touched me that you all are finding this so moving and real. A great loss is always hard to deal with, and I wasn't sure I could do it justice in a 60ish page story, but you all have confirmed that I've somehow managed it, and that's a wonderful compliment

I will try and have the next part up before 5 EST -- I have to wait until I get home from work.

Thanks again all