Awwww, I loved how you turned it all around for them. Clark's powers are back and they are healing, together. Very nice ending to a heart wrenching story. Good job! Laura

Hi,

Great story. Love Lois ideas for the future and the healing they both doing together.

MAF

Congratulations, Sara!

I love how you ended this. Not perfectly, not with a pristine bow on absolutely every loose end - a story like this has to have some untidiness, some unresolved issues, because it's simply not realistic that either Lois or Clark could recover easily from what happened. This was just right.

I felt my heart melting when Clark said he wanted to be a hero to Lois.

And I loved the final lines:

Just beautiful!

This story is now going on my Kerth list...


Wendy

Fantastic ending to a fantastic story .

~Julia

I think I may have sounded critical in my comments on the previous part of this story. If so, it was completely unintentional. You hit every question on my "what now" list and a couple more besides. I agree that this story should not have a neat and tidy ending, that much more healing must occur for both Clark and Lois, but the knowledge each one has that the other will be there with a shoulder to cry on is a comfort.

I also liked a LOT how Jonathan and Martha nudged them together. That's the kind of wisdom all parents of teenage or adult children aspire to and rarely think of in time. It was an excellent resolution to an excellent story. I hope you have more in the hopper.

Sara

The ending is just right for this heart-wrenching story.

Tricia

Excellent ending, just the right amount of suffering and forgiveness all mixed up with some understanding and L-O-V-E.

*sigh* I love happy endings. GREAT job!

~Liz

Exceptional I really liked this story!

Have I mentioned I love your writing style ;p

Hey guys

First of all, I want to apologise for taking so long to reply to these comments... I've just left for a three-week hiatus to Dublin City University, I'll have limited Internet time while I'm here, and *of course* I completely forgot to do it before I left :p

I really appreciated all of these comments so needless to say, I was pretty grateful when it didn't

I've had the time of my life writing this story, and most of that was gleaned from the fantastic feedback I got - thank you all so much for your comments I really appreciate everything you've said, all the constructive critiscm, etc etc etc... you've made it a better story

Sara.

Beautiful! I really enjoyed this story and you did a great job with the ending.

Jackie