FDK A Close Shave - an IRC Round Robin by Crazy Writers R Us

That was adorable! And what a clever little title! LOL! I loved it, it had all the makings of a good fanfiction in a short little compact story. Good job guys! Laura

I had lots of fun watching you all write it. Glad it's finally here--where I can see the parts I missed.

I love the humor, love Lois's ramblings, good dialogue (with an excellent finish), some angst in there (of course

), and a perfect title! Great job, all of you!

Very nicely done, indeed! A very sweet, nicely crafted story.

Irene

Ooh, fun! Good premise, funny lines -- *perfect* ending line. Oh, and a good title.

PJ

I like it!

Just what I needed to distract me from my bad mood for a while.

Keep it up!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.

awesome!

That was lots of fun.

I usually don't read Round Robins because they are unevenly written and tend to ramble on. A Close Shave did neither.

Great read!

gerry

Sara, Julie, Wendy & Sarah

A great story!

I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia

Okay, I agree that the title was appropriate for this little vignette, but I still think it was just a bit evil to get my hopes up with a title like that.

Tank (who realizes he should have known better)

Great story!!!!

I love it!!!

Karla

Cute. Savor that word. I wont use it again.

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Cute. Savor that word. I wont use it again.

We'll take that as a compliment

Julie

(shining her Crazy-Writers-R-Us badge)

Loved the story, You all did a great job! Hope to see more RR in the future.

Rach

Super!

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"You don't need to think! You think too much!"

Loved this line.

Good grief. I thought I made a comment on this one. Sorry I didn't.

I remember i really enjoyed it. It made me giggle.

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She shrugged. "I'm a reporter. It's what I do."

"What? Snoop?"

She rolled her eyes. "Investigate. Collect evidence. Establish the facts."

"In my bathroom?"

"Why not? Anyway, answer the question, Kent!"

This is what set my giggle session in motion if I remember correctly.

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Under the bed! That was where she hid her romance novels. There had to be something under there.

Nope. Not even a dust bunny. Honestly! Who actually vacuumed all the way under their bed?

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"Well, see, Lois, I got rid of it... because... I have this habit of replacing all my shaving stuff every month on this day."

What a lunkhead.

Thank you!!

Shame on us for not responding to feedback sooner!!

We're all glad you enjoyed our lasted insane creation! As always, it was a blast to write!! Thanks to the IRC crowd for the funny comments along the way, which always prove to make the story just that much more funny.

Great writing with you Wendy, Julie, and Sarah!!!!

Sara

Oy, Sara's right, shame on us... thanks for all the wonderful comments!!

It really was great fun to write. <g>

Julie