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Posted By: jackiek FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 11:46 AM
Great part! Now only if Clark could get over his fears and just get together with Lois already.
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 12:25 PM
Oohh this is so good. But yeah, they seem to need another huge talk coming...Most of me just screams, "Kiss him and hit him over the head with a ClueX4!"

JD
Posted By: Karen Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 12:52 PM
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He took a breath, looked into her eyes, and nearly screamed in terror. There, shining back at him, alive and kicking... Mad Dog Lane.
YAY! One of them is back, now to work on the other! And we're finally getting to parts that doesn't make me whimper at the end. laugh
Posted By: minimunch3 Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 05:57 PM
Looks like my hope held out! Yay! Now if only Clark could loosen up a bit grumble . But Lois is back, and ready to whip him into shape. It's about time.

I'm still loving this story, although I'm glad it isn't making me so sad and worried between parts. And I'm glad the mustache is gone, too. That needed to go wink .

Great story thumbsup I can't wait for the next part!

~Kristen
Posted By: Supes1fan Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 06:16 PM
MDL lives! dance

Glad they finally got it all out into the open. But I can't see why Clark had pulled away yet again esp. after the doctor visit? confused

He needs a good thwap!

Great part!

~Liz
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 06:29 PM
Cute part. Hope they get it together soon. laura
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/05/05 08:32 PM
Hi,

Great parts. thumbsup

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She ached for him, for the loss of his personality, the sheer vibrancy about him that had affected her since the first time she'd met him. He'd been so remote, the past few days, as if his smiles and greetings were something expected of him, purely perfunctory. It was as if suddenly he'd snapped back inside his shell, and no amount of prising would get him back out.

The same old story, she thought bitterly. Clark Kent promised her everything, and then when push came to shove, he didn't deliver.
I don't think he forgave Lois.

confused What Luthor up to?

confused Does the detective investigating Luthor?

More soon, please.

MAF hyper
Posted By: minimunch3 Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/06/05 04:26 AM
My thoughts were that he pulled away after the doctor visit because maybe he's being his usual self, meaning he is somehow upset that its not his baby. Maybe he's mad that its Luthor's child and all. It's a stupid reason to be mad and I could be really wrong, but that's just a little theory I had.

~Kristen
Posted By: Sorcha Re: FDK-Made to be Broken 12 - 05/09/05 11:27 AM
Hey, guys smile

I hope you'll all forgive me making this a short one... I don't have very long online, and I've got a million things to do while I *am* here :p

Much gushing praise, blush , thumbsup And wow!! eek All 12 parts?? Incredible. Thanks so much for catching up!! smile

I'm going to leave it there, guys... thank you all so much!! notworthy

Sara smile
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