Hi

Tomatoes goes here...
All kind of FDK is welcomed but please don´t use eggs or any kind of weapons.

Karla

That was cute, Karla - I was a little confused at the start when they were shouting Superman, which was his name, but then the conversation between the reporters and our hero began discussing Superman as quite obviously someone else entirely.

But it was only a few paragraphs on from that, that you explained that one, so it didn't matter to me too much. I'm one of those readers who doesn't mind being confused at some point in a story, so long as the confusion is cleared up at some point before the end and you did that just fine.

Anyway

LabRat

I have to agree with Labby about being a bit confused.

Apart from that, it was cute!!!

Keep writing!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Very cute Karla!

Yes, very cute!

I liked it.

Hey Karla

Great to see you writing. I was confused too, but the rest i liked.

Carl Kent is a good name for clark's son.

Keep 'black' writing

MDL.

Hi

Thank you

No, no, no, no! Don't change it, the 'confusing' part was the fun part!

If you take that away it's just another little next-gen story. Nice, but it wouldn't put a grin on my face!

ok... Your wish is my ...well you know Xanabee.
Thank you

Karla