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Posted By: ChiefPam FDK: Long Strange Trip, final - 04/29/05 03:54 AM
Wow, it's weird to think that this story is finished goofy Now you can edit it, and send it to the archives, and give Masques a run for its money, length-wise, and be up for a few Kerths next year! smile But, um, I wouldn't hold my breath for Best Super Short if I were you wink

This was a lovely middle-of-the-night/morning-after section. Loved Lois telling Clark he has to stop over-reacting. And that she can call things to a halt part-way through, and he'll be fine with it.

Best line:

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“Yeah. Wives can be demanding. Did you know that before, or is this coming as a surprise to you?”
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Later today I'll go through and get the file and TOC updated... err, I mean... finished. See, it's weird to even think that! And if you want a copy of my file, feel free to ask, but be aware I've been saving the pg version. smile

PJ
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK: Long Strange Trip, final - 04/29/05 05:29 AM
Yay!! hyper

So romantic! blush

Jose wave
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK: Long Strange Trip, final - 05/03/05 06:46 PM
Hi,

Great End . thumbsup

I’m sorry for not commenting in previous parts.

MAF blush
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