FDK: Investigating Luthor 5, or some hope yet.... - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Nice part.

You nicely interweave the original plot with your unique, intriguing plotline. Absolutely superb!

You've got everyone working to get Lex. The teams are in place. Now they just have to get the evidence they need.

I can't wait to read more.

gerry

Great part!

They're gonna get him, right?!

I loved this:

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Some say a spider’s web only lasts three weeks and two days from its creation. The planets female form, mother nature shall return to the origin for the renewing of the web as the sun sets, for this is the best way to catch a fly.

Anybody who reads that is going to think she's lost her mind. Good job, Lois.

Maybe Alice could pass along a message to Clark for Lois.

Nan