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Posted By: Terry Leatherwood FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/04/05 01:11 PM
Okay, I confess, I was wrong. "Kenneth" is Clark.

But I just have one word to whisper:

"Asabi."

Remember when Clark switched bodies with that crook? Oops! I'm in trouble now!
Posted By: Sira Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/04/05 01:48 PM
Another fascinating chapter!

I'm glad Lois figured where to go. I did two chapters ago. *gloats* laugh

And I'm now convinced that something is seriously wrong with poor Clark Kenneth Clarkson Kent. Probably all Luthor's fault. I'm still not sure if he's got his superpowers or not...

Hey, I'll just keep reading and then I'll sure find out.

--> Hint: More, please!

Sira - thumbsup
Posted By: ethnica Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/04/05 05:53 PM
You know, this is the way I've always thought Lex would act after the challenge was gone. I'm glad Lois found the guts to leave. I'm super glad she found someone to help her. After she'd been physically and emotionally battered she didn't have the tools to save herself. Very believable chapter.
Posted By: Supes1fan Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/04/05 07:05 PM
Lois needs to take charge of herself and get going! Yay Charlie!

Great part - great story!

~Liz

PS. Poor tortured Clark frown
Posted By: YConnell Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/05/05 12:08 PM
Sara, I just wanted to drop in to say I'm really intrigued by the little I've managed to skim of this story, and by the writing style you've adopted. I haven't had time to read any of it properly yet, but will try to catch up over the next few days. smile

Yvonne
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/05/05 12:12 PM
Still painful, still agonising, still making me ache for Lois, Sara! And people say I'm giving her a hard time at the moment???

And now Clark's accepted a date with another woman?! razz At least he doesn't exactly seem too happy about it. goofy

The one saving grace is that Lois has finally worked out where she can go to be safe. YAY! clap Go Martha and Jonathan!


Wendy smile
Posted By: Sorcha Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/07/05 11:30 AM
Hey guys smile

At any minute, my connection is going to go nuts again and I'm afraid it might not let me back on, so I'll have to make this short... frown

I really, really, really appreciate all your comments smile Wow!! clap

And Yvonne, I'm both **THRILLED** you're reading it and terrified you're reading it... <g> Thanks so much for letting me know smile

Anyway, I need to post Part Four before my computer kicks me :p Thanks again, guys!

Sara smile
Posted By: Nicole S Re: FDK: Made to be Broken 3/? - 04/10/05 02:34 AM
This is so good, and I still have more to read, yay! Great chapter! Very like Lois! I feel so bad for her, but things look to be heading in a better direction... right?? grumble ... and Clark is going on a date with... not Lois? Hmmm... we'll have to work something out about that!!! :p

I'm hooked smile
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