FDK: Innocence Lost 4/? - 01/16/05 08:41 PM
Tomatoes go here. Thanks to those who have stuck with this, and I'm working on the next chapter.
Laura
Laura
Re: FDK: Innocence Lost 4/? - 01/17/05 02:42 PM
Hi,
Great part.
Rachel is not going to get better, if she continue to get more stress.
The war just start. This kid is dangerous!
OMG! Please tell me that Gary is still in jail and not out and killing kid that look like Rachel.
More ASAP, please.
MAF
Great part.
Rachel is not going to get better, if she continue to get more stress. Quote
She chewed and swallowed her hot dog and was about to take another bite when Timmy knocked it out of her hand and pinched her again. "Hey!" she protested, "you did that on *purpose*!"
Clark stopped talking to Lois and looked at them. Timmy had a huge grin on his face, as if he were vastly amused at his half-sister's complaint. "Timothy Raymond Russell, *did* you do that on purpose?" he asked.
One look at Clark must've let Timmy know that he meant business. "Yes." He answered. "She's good-for-nothing- trash. She's a *bastard*; an *accident*. She doesn't deserve to sit with me. Daddy said so, and Daddy's *right*."
"No, he's *not*." Rachel broke in. "*Your* daddy's in *jail* cause he's a *bad* man."
Clark stopped talking to Lois and looked at them. Timmy had a huge grin on his face, as if he were vastly amused at his half-sister's complaint. "Timothy Raymond Russell, *did* you do that on purpose?" he asked.
One look at Clark must've let Timmy know that he meant business. "Yes." He answered. "She's good-for-nothing- trash. She's a *bastard*; an *accident*. She doesn't deserve to sit with me. Daddy said so, and Daddy's *right*."
"No, he's *not*." Rachel broke in. "*Your* daddy's in *jail* cause he's a *bad* man."
The war just start. This kid is dangerous!Quote
"They connect the different depths and provide a base to build on," he explained. "I'll be adding the eyes in next. Bill, did the pathologist determine the race of the child?"
"Caucasian," was Henderson's answer. "So far, all the victims have had blue or green eyes and light brown hair."
"Caucasian," was Henderson's answer. "So far, all the victims have had blue or green eyes and light brown hair."
OMG! Please tell me that Gary is still in jail and not out and killing kid that look like Rachel. More ASAP, please.
MAF
Re: FDK: Innocence Lost 4/? - 01/19/05 05:14 AM
I read it two days ago. I'm happy to see it back! The little boy freaks me out. I wonder what emotional low we shall hit before all turns out right. I'm going to enjoy the ride. I'm surprised Lois and Clark are not questioning the little cutie pie more about her 1/2 brother. I dunno. I guess they don't have the time, don't realize what this kid is like, she's only a little girl or...? Maybe that would ruin the story!
