Hey! I am new at this whole posting-stories-here-thing, but it seems like the place to be! Everyone seems really cool! So any and all feedback is COMPLETELY welcome!!

thanks!

~nicole

Welcome to the boards!!

WELCOME TO THE BOARDS!! This is a super fun bunch and we are always looking for more people to party with.

This was quite a start..so much stuff packed into part 1. Lois pretty much stomped on Clark but good at the end, poor baby.

Looking forward to more!

~Liz

Welcome, welcome!

Do I smell a story full of angst and heartache? I'm in love with turmoil; I'm a little weird that way.

Have fun
JD

Welcome to the boards, Nicole! I really enjoyed Lois Lane's Diary (yes, I know, bad reader, I did't send feedback

And a BatP/HoL story! I wish Kae weren't so busy right now, as she'd adore this. And so do I! You do a great job of pegging their emotional interaction here, and Lois's dialogue in places is so real I can hear her say it - especially that bit about needing better accident insurance. Brilliant! And I especially like the part about no glasses and clothes on the ground.

So, twenty parts... sounds like you have a lot of angst to come. Definitely my kind of story!

Teeny, tiny nitpick: you have a few 'is' within the narrative which should be 'was' - for example:
This should be 'say she was his best friend'. As I said, tiny nitpick if you catch things like that now, it means less work when you're ready to submit to the Archive.

Okay, so since it looks like you have the story completely finished, when do we get more?


Wendy

Hi,

Great part.

Wow poor confused Clark! I hope she forgives him soon. Laura

Hey everyone! Thanks for the welcome and the feedback!! It's so encouraging and helpful! I am ALMOST done w/ this story, not fully done. It's VERY long though, so there's lots of buffer to post, and by the time I get to the end, I'll be done w/ it.

I am thinking I will post 3 times a week... once every other day? I'll post tomorrow, and then try to make it a M-W-F thing.

Thanks again!

That's a great beginning.

But now I'm worried. That big fight with Clark looked really serious. And I don't like that she is actually considering Lex as the one good thing in her life.

Yeah! Excellent start, really draws the reader in! I'll fasten my seat belt because I sense a bumpy ride ahead.

Welcome to the Boards!!

I love your story.

I can´t wait to read the next part.

Karla

Lois Lane's Diary? (comment above) I missed that! I must read. I'm a fan of this fic so I'm going to check that one out.



I love it basicly!! Thank you

Hi Nicole,

Lois Lane's Diary was great, but I'm sure I already told you that on that e-mail! Welcome to the boards. I'm currently reading the first part of this story here so I'll edit it later.

See you!!! Great to have you here!!! Just let me know where I can find your fan club buttons.


MDL.

Oh dear, 1 of 20, and there are only 6 up. Oh my I am not very patient dear. I already began the roller coaster rid, and I want to ride it out. First chapter, started, Down, then looked up, then Down, my heart was tugged along with Clarks.