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Posted By: daneel FDK-The Long Road Home 21/? - 12/08/04 08:49 AM
How long is going to take Agnes to find out? wink

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Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK-The Long Road Home 21/? - 12/08/04 10:23 AM
Hi,

Great part. help He should start with a Superman foundation.


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"When I didn't feel like I was getting anywhere going through the companies on the San Francisco shipping company's list of customers," she began, "I decided to try going about this from your coast. I looked through Jimmy's research that you sent me and found out that the Metropolis shipping company is owned by a conglomerate that has their hands in a bunch of different kinds of businesses--power and phone companies, a few retail chains…and get this--a few art and antique galleries, one of which is in France."

Clark stared at her blankly. "I guess I'm not seeing the significance."

Lois's voice became more animated. "Because it's the same dealer that had the antique vase up for auction, the same vase we suspect Mesopotamia, Inc. claimed they had stolen."

"You're kidding!" Clark exclaimed, his eyes widening. "So you think somebody with Mesopotamia, Inc. arranged for the vase to be stolen, collected the insurance money, then had this other subsidiary company auction off the vase for them in their art house overseas?"
help What will Perry think of Lois working with Clark?


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She reached down to trace the small scars near her wrist. "There was glass everywhere, and I ended up with a lot of stitches, a broken leg, a ruptured spleen, and some internal bleeding. The scar you saw on my stomach the other night was from the surgery I had the night of the accident. I was pretty beat up for a while there, but ironically, I was the luckiest. The doctors told me my parents died on the scene, and my sister died a short time after she got to the hospital."
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Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK-The Long Road Home 21/? - 12/08/04 12:41 PM
Talk about throwing me for a loop! It never even occurred to me that those scars were from the accident!

Good part,
JD
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Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK-The Long Road Home 21/? - 12/08/04 08:54 PM
Wow very touching. Good job. Clark could have tucked her in though<g> Laura
Posted By: gerry Re: FDK-The Long Road Home 21/? - 12/09/04 07:00 AM
I can't believe that I'm going to write the following, but here goes.

(Not this part) I really enjoyed the interaction between Lois and Clark, the way they made up, the fact that they did make up quickly and without a lot of gruelling introspection, the getting to know each other better. It's been a wonderful read which gives us insight to both characters.

But (this part is what I don't believe I'm writing), I'm itching to read more about the A-plot. When will they get together (in Metropolis) and catch Luthor whose already worried about what Lois can do?

Not that I don't like the relationship stuff...I do. I really do.

Oh, I'm so confused. dizzy

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Posted By: ErinK Re: FDK-The Long Road Home 21/? - 12/09/04 08:50 AM
</font><blockquote><font size="1" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">quote:</font><hr /><font size="2" face="Verdana, Helvetica, sans-serif">Originally posted by gerry:
<strong> I can't believe that I'm going to write the following, but here goes.

But (this part is what I don't believe I'm writing), I'm itching to read more about the A-plot. When will they get together (in Metropolis) and catch Luthor whose already worried about what Lois can do?

Not that I don't like the relationship stuff...I do. I really do.

Oh, I'm so confused. thumbsup

And thank you to everyone for the feedback! It really keeps me writing.
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