Girls...


I can´t take it anymore. Somehow 15 pages twice a week are not enough for me. Enough!!! No wait... Make it forever!!! I love it!!! I´m feeling like Lois: at first the idea of comitting to something this complicated scared me. Now I must admit I´m totally in love with him ... no not him (well with him too but I meant it). As long as Clark is healthy and Lois is beginning to respond and their relationship are getting steady and stronger, I´m fine and happy! I can take another semester at univ. gladly.

Thanks for this amazing story. I am living every minute of it. Thanks, Thanks, Thanks... You´re an inspiration for any writer wanna be. 'I know I look like Clark with all this thank thingy' , but I just wanted you two to know I really love it and I´m totally hooked on the story.

Arghhhhhh where´s Pheromone????

MDL.

I just love this story! Very good, ladies!
Finally Lois is bonding with her husband and her child, Clark is in better shape, and all is right in the world... or not?
I just don't see this as a smooth sailing: probably there is a chunk od Kriptonite somewhere (in Luthor' hands?) preparated just for a Superman not in his usually I'm-like-a-god shape, or perhaps a turned down suitor is going to make a move against a proud husband and daddy-to-be... please, this is going to be a happy ending, isn't it?
This story has title-chapter like the show: so are we going to have eighty and more parts?
Because titles like "Requiem for a super hero" or "Neverending battle" are scary! And "The phoenix" is not better: something must die to rise again, and when this is Luthor is okay, but here is Clark who's risking is life!

Simona

WOW, you just warm my heart. This part is so moving! You two are really fantastic writers. Thanks
Sil

I'm with Mad Dog: "15 pages twice a week are not enough for me". I NEED MORE!!!!
I'm pretty happy with the Lois's change of attitude towards Clark. Good segment.
I loved this part!
Beautiful!
I guess she wouldn't has protested... nor felt uncomfortable...
Me, too!



~ Andreia

FYI: Clark's birthday is Feb 28th.

Is Lois being nice to Clark because it's her version of taking sick kids of Disney World or is it because he's her baby's father? It seems as though she sees he's a good man who deserves to have a good life, but does she want to spend it with him? Is she seeing Clark as the man she wants to spend the rest of her life with?

Aw sweet. More soon. Laura

HAPPY CONTENT {{{{{{{{{SIGH}}}}}}}}} !!!!

Ladies-
This is a great story.

Is it sad to say that I wanted to spin in my chair when I saw that a new part was up? The dynamic duo is slowly but surely making their way torwards togetherness!

They had a close encounter a few parts back when they woke up together before Clark got sick. They seem to have steered completly away from that... I have an inkling that it may be coming back (in some shape or form). I think in the beginning we met Lois and Clark as two passionate characters: Lois determined to have a baby; Clark determined to have it done right.

Martha was a saint- love how Lois was accepting the "take care of my daughter" bit. In my opinion, Lois doesn't have much experience with feeling love... so she probably doesn't know how to recognize that she has those type of feelings for Clark. What she is describing as not wanting to live without him, and his being her friend... it's just preparation for her self-realization. With that in mind- I am rooting for her.

I wonder about Clark's self-esteem. He's very, very sick and is having to supress his feelings for Lois. Will he start to misjudge her opening up to him as pity? Hope not... but we'll just have to wait and see!

Thanks for sharing, guys!

~sunkist (counting down to the next post)

A truly heartwarming reading!! More please!!

SQD and Jenni

A wonderful part!

Tricia

Yay!!

Hi,

Great piece.