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Posted By: Mad Dog Lane FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/22/04 08:11 PM
Hey Nan, thumbsup
Posted By: Laurach Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/22/04 08:38 PM
Nice ending Nan. Good job. Laura
Posted By: Shadow Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/22/04 11:50 PM
Nice ending!

Cool story.
JD
cool
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 04:28 AM
Good!!! smile1
Posted By: TriciaW Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 04:44 AM
Nan

A wonderful ending! smile1

Tricia cool
Posted By: Mister Data Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 11:01 AM
Very nice.

James
Posted By: Supes1fan Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 12:44 PM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwww... sloppy

Great finish Nan!!

~Liz
Posted By: Simona Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 02:54 PM
Great story, Nan! clap clap clap
I'm hoping for a long "Wedding series"!

Simona smile
Posted By: mariadferdez. Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 03:38 PM
Hi,

Sweet. clap

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Well, they would return to Metropolis next week and ride out the storm of their fifteen minutes of fame. She would rid herself of the burden of Lex's money, and then she and Clark and Superman would go to work as a team to find out who had tried to kill them. The "Mrs.", whoever she was, was going to find out the hard way that she had tangled with the wrong people.

And then, when everything was back to normal, she and Clark would be married quietly. Their partnership at work would become a partnership in life.

That was going to be the most thrilling adventure of all.

The End
Great story. notworthy

wallbash But I expected to see what was happening in Metropolis, the donation to the foundation, the search of the mysterious woman a little bit more of the smallville vacation.

MAF frown
Posted By: LaurieD Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 04:41 PM
Thanks, Nan! Great job. LaurieD wink
Posted By: Wendymr Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 08:56 PM
Okay, romantic and WAFFy as this was - goofy

So I'm expecting a sequel to this to show up shortly, in which Ms Carlin makes her appearance. Right? wink


Wendy smile
Posted By: Aria Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/23/04 09:05 PM
This was great, Nan! A thoroughly enjoying read to say the very least. You do what I find hugely admirable when it comes to writing, and that was to make a story with very little setting change and a fairly straight forward plot *completely* enthralling all the same. I loved your character development throughout. Hope you don't mind me gushing like this :p

Although I'm gonna have to do back up vocals with Wendy on the "This Needs a Sequel!" chorale.

Thanks for the fun read smile
Posted By: Jenni Debb Re: FDK- Wedding consequences- part 10 - 08/24/04 02:15 AM
Hi Nan,

I like this end Nan, but it can't be 'The End'.

You still have a lot of loose ends to tie up and I look forward to another Nan sequel. wink

Yours Jenni
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