Hi,

Great part.

This continues to be terrific, Yvonne. I know I haven't hardly been commenting, and I feel very guilty about that, but I just never seem to have enough time, somehow. Which is ridiculous, since both my kids are now in school, but I guess with them both gone, I'm leaving the house a lot more... or whatever.

Anyway, point is, I'm loving this, please keep going soonest.

PJ

Wow, Yvonne. Wonderful part. I love where Lois' inner voice is going (to live with Clark). The scene with George was amazing: humorous and detailed. I'm glad Lois is determined to go along "tomorrow night" as it is bound to be dangerous. Clark will find out how much he needs her and what a great team they are.

I haven't posted much, either, like Pam, but I've been reading avidly.

LaurieD

I know I'm a little late to comment, but this was... wow!!

Clark's past is much darker than it seems, and you make it seem so natural!! Kudos!!

Post more soon!
See ya,
AnnaBtG.