FDK:Don't Be A Stranger-Part 17 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Hi,

Great part.

Sweet!

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He nodded. "He's Wendell Dalton, isn't he? President of Dalton Electronics?"

Lois clapped her hand to her forehead. "I knew I recognised him from somewhere! A while back, Laker-Elektronic made a takeover bid for Dalton, and Wendell Dalton's picture was in the paper a few days running. I should have remembered."

"That's not where I've seen him," Clark said, his brows narrowing. "A couple of nights ago - I was flying home after an emergency, so I only saw them for a couple of seconds - he was coming out of an expensive restaurant with Lex Luthor and they were getting into Luthor's limo."

I was glad to see this today. while the A plot is heating up the B plot seems to be trudging along slowly<g> For me anyway! But I know it will come, it always does in a Wendy story and I am waiting patiently for it of course...NOT. Ok, so I am impatient, but I am sure it will be worth the wait. Of course I hope Clark figures out very soon that he can control his responses to humans. How is it that with two loving and tactile parents he hasn't figured it out already? Keep this one coming Wendy, good job, and I am looking very forward to some more. Laura

Oh boy, talk about a mess.

It's good to see the investigation is already paying off, even though a lot of it is guessing. I do hope they'll get proof at the Metro Club.

Clark's getting really paranoid. Not only wondering about physically hurting people, but now he wonders about controling people!

Help him, Wendy! Maybe Lois should take the initiative to hug him... kissing is fine by me too.

I loved Lois's reaction to that suit from upstairs and her outburst. Maybe they'll get their desks back, maybe they'll get another clue. Should prove interesting in time.

Good luck with the writing, Wendy.

We'll still be here when you have more.

Saskia

Looking forward to see them in the Metro Club!

Jose

I realize that I probably have an unhealthy desire to see those who deserve it get what's coming to them, but when Lois and Clark bring down Luthor, I'd love to see that Dalton jackass be thoroughly humiliated somehow. It would serve him right.

Anyway, good solid installment. Lois and Clark are putting together the pieces slowly but surely. On the other hand, I still think Clark needs a session or two with Dr. Friskin.

Nan

Great Part!

Ingra

Hmmm, Lex is after them for real now

I can't wait to see how the Metro Club pans out now that Lex spotting Lois singing will surely be the end of her, assuming it happens at all!

And

at the lawyer at the accident scene! That was a great touch.

Looking forward to more

Wendy

Another excellent part!

Tricia

Hi guys!

I have to be very quick here as we're about to leave Minneapolis and head on across to Milwaukee. So it's goodbye to beautiful Minnesota and the very friendly people herein

and hello Wisconsin!

So all I have time to say is thank you all very much indeed for your comments and feedback. I really, really appreciate knowing that people are reading and still enjoying the story, even after such a slow posting schedule. As for Lois, Clark and the Toasters - and Lex! - all will be revealed in due course.

Part 18 coming up!

Wendy