Hi,

Great part.

Ok ... Maybe I read it too fast, but why doesn't Clark phone Lois?

I am liking it. That guy is in soooo much trouble. How on earth is he going to explain himself!?!

I hope Clark wakes up and finds out that this is just one big horrible nightmare!!

I like it but I have to admit - I don't have a clue as to where this is leading.

Curious to see where are you going with this

Jose

Great Part!

Ingra

Ha! It's so neat to see people be in suspense over something i'm writing. YOu know, this whole thing jsut began because i always wanted to see what would happen if Lois fell when they were in the clouds. So of course, the rest of the story has followed along. I like the way it's coming. I'm way ahead of here in my writing, so it does get quite good, i must say myself. But i think i was reading too much Alt-Clark stories because he really wasn't acting like the proper Clark, but then red kryptonite can be the reason for that! I thought this was going to be a really short story when i started, but low and behold, it's got a life of its own. I can barely wait to see what happens!

This is way too confusing for my head... he has a trauma!!! he cant stay there... and whats this thing of Perry´s son? Wasnt it much after Cat left.. i thought they were married by that time.

this is too weird.

guess i have to do more reading...


Heading to part 6 now