FDK: Damaged-Part 18 - Lois & Clark Fanfic Message Boards

Hi,

Great part.

If I were Clark I'll have front road sit. Be there went they arrest the weasel in front of Mrs. Perfect.

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And suddenly, some pieces of the red kryptonite puzzle began to come together. Lana was from Smallville. She’d grown up with Clark. If anyone knew where to find red kryptonite, it would be her. In fact, didn’t she even have a motive for wanting to hurt him? He’d dumped her, hadn’t he?

“Clark, are you sure Lana doesn’t know about her husband?” she asked.

“Yes.”

“Because...well...she knows you, and-“

He whirled around. “You think she told him, don’t you?” he demanded. “Told him where to find the stuff, told him what it does to me?”

Maybe she has something to do with this. The perfect revenge.

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He stared at her. <<Return them? Are you serious?>>

<<It’ll be a piece of cake the second time around. You’ll breeze it.>>

<<I’ll...? You mean you’re not planning on coming with me?>> he asked.

<<Of course not. It’s dangerous. You said so yourself.>>

<<Lois... Did anyone ever tell you you’re the most exasperating person a guy could ever work with?>>

She grinned. <<No, but then I always used to work alone.>>

<<I can see why.>>

Nice work you two. Oh I mean nice work Yvonne! I like how they are working together so well and I am glad Lois didn't give up on getting that job. Laura

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He stared at her. <<Return them? Are you serious?>>

<<It'll be a piece of cake the second time around. You'll breeze it.>>

<<I'll...? You mean you're not planning on coming with me?>> he asked.

<<Of course not. It's dangerous. You said so yourself.>>

<<Lois... Did anyone ever tell you you're the most exasperating person a guy could ever work with?>>

LOL!

I like seeing the strong Lois come out into the world again.

Julie

Oooooh! Nice, exciting part!

Keep it up!

See ya,
AnnaBtG.

and the plot thickens....

I like it, nice them working together, Clark being his usual and Lois being hers!

just chaught the last few parts: great!

Finally Lois's coming back! Probably it's not going to be a smooth trip, but it's a very good start!
Poor Clark! We loved to hate Lana in Addicted, but I hope she's not a criminal, for Clark' sake!

Simona

My lips are sealed, Simona.

BTW, I just have to share this with you:-

I invented Barton, okay? Totally off the top of my head, I created this boring-sounding town near Metropolis that also (hopefully) sounded vaguely American. I think I had Barstow in mind at the time. Anyway. I'm driving to my friend's house near Cambridge yesterday, and what village do I pass through? BARTON!!! Let me tell you, the Twilight Zone music was ringing in my ears as I passed the Barton village pond, the Barton well, a gaggle of Barton ducks, the Barton thatched cottage...

Oh, and I should point out that I've only visited this friend once before and that was a year ago.

Yvonne-the-Spooky