Hi,

Beautifuil description.

Ooooooooooh - intriguing! Very, very intriguing. And, nope, don't have any zingers to report.

Really enjoyed this first taste of what looks to be an interesting story, Diane. The perspective was fresh and I'm keen to find out more. Already feeling sorry for Clark. <G> And your writing style was easy to read.

More soon?

LabRat

Took the words right out of my mouth, literally. I finished this piece, and I just let out one big Ooooooh! I can't wait to see where this goes! Great beginning!

Jen

Great Start!

Ingra

You already know what I think, Diane.

But I just wanted to say congratulations on posting your first story!

Even though I've read this a few times, I still feel so bad for Clark.

Sara

Hmm, I'm dying to know what's going on here... good writing so far. Poor Clark...

And how well do we get to know Janice? It's really interesting to look at things through her eyes, given all that we know about "Maybe-Charlie" that she doesn't and can't even guess at.

More!

PJ

Hey Diane...

you know that. Post more every day. a paragraph... you won´t run out of ideas... pleaseeeeeeeeee.

Guys, don´t you think she´s torturing us???

Morrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeee... for today ??? What

for yesterday? Oh... thanks

MDL.

Diane

An excellent start!

Tricia

/me is curious

Jose

Wow, I'm so glad I've gotten all of your interest Now let's just see if I can keep it hehe.

Just dropping in very briefly here to say great start, Diane, and welcome! Looking forward to more!


Wendy