Well, you know I love this story...

heh. Well, in that case... More, more!!

PJ

Oh, this is sooooo good!!

Can't wait for the next part!!

AnnaBtG.

Yay!! finally part 2 of Addicted!
this will be a wonderful journey!
Thanks Yvonne! (and thanks to the Terrible Three!)

Simona

Interesting.

I wonder what's wrong with Clark.

Cliffhangers are good, so long as they don't last too long. (A day should do it).

Tank (who is sure that, just to make it easier to take care of while in the clinic, Lois' hair has already been cut short)

Hi,

Great part.

Oh, Yvonne, you don't know how much I've been expecting this since someone on IRC let slip that you were writing it!

And she talks! I wasn't expecting that to happen so quickly! Of course... who knows what you do in the next part...

More soon, please!

Julie

I was one of the FOLCS who begged you to write a sequel!! Mafia BR Mafia BR.

You guys are my heroes!

Wow....these Alt-Clark stories are so prolific. It so happens I am writing a sequel to Jungle Love...and I am very intimidated by the high-class competition (as I'm sure I am *no* competition). Maybe I'll wait to start posting until CC's and this story are over???

my insecurities are showing huh?

Anyway...Poor Clark...to be late to a meeting with Lois he must be *really* sick. Red Kryptonite shakes???

Speaking of "Addicted", that describes my FOLCworld computer habit lately...all these great stories to read and so little time (darn full time job!).

What's your posting schedule (every day would be good <g>)?

Oh goody!! We have a sequel!! Looking foward to this and can't wait to see where this goes.

Caryn

To all those who, ah, encouraged Yvonne, THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!

And Yvonne, this is great! POST MORE! SOOOOOON!

Yay yay yay yay yay yay yay yay YAY!!!!!!!!!! Yippee! Woo hoo!!!!!!!!!

Yvonne, I love you! Mafia-BRs, I love you! Pam, I love you! Yvonne, I love you!

This is off to an incredible start, Y. Beautiful insight into Lois's mind, how she's come to depend on Clark to be her voice. It's wonderful to see her willing to depend on him, to allow him to help her, but at the same time, the people at the clinic are right, you're right -- it's dangerous for her to depend on him so much. And now he needs to depend on her. Reciprocity! Yay! Painful, yes, but what a great basis for a relationship -- mutual help. Not to mention adoration.

And, Y, what do you mean about 'if we don't like it, you can stop'?!?! Are you NUTS? No, I know you're not. Which means...MORE!

Bethy (who's not excited. Nope. Not at all. Wherever would you get that idea?

Please post again very soon , I can't - well, I don't wanna wait

~Julia

Thank you for the incredibly warm welcome. I haven't a lot to say in response to your comments, although Chris asked about my posting schedule. I'll try Mondays, Wednesdays and Fridays to start with, and see how things go. Already I've fallen behind, considering I posted on Monday and haven't written a word since. Oh, dear...

Well Yvonne, when i read that this was a sequel to Addicted, I of course had to print Addicted out (encouraged that it was the winner of course) and read it first before i started reading this.

I loved addicted. I wondered what it would be like for him to be on red stuff like that. Now i'm so glad that this is happening, your sequel. Actually, I forgot where i'd seen it, so was a bit sad that it'll be in installments.

Have you had an inside peek at addiction? You write like you know intimately how it all works.
Nancy

Hi Yvonne,

At last I'm catching up with the start of this fic and I have to say I'm totally 'addicted'.

And one good thing about being behind is that I have two other chapters to read.

Yours Jenni