Nice ending. I am glad she wasn't too mad at him. Laura

Awww! Nice WAFFy finish, Sas - and I'm glad they weren't afraid to bring up all the harsh things they'd said and get apologies for them, too! And hugs and smoochies...

Lovely story!


Wendy

Maybe an nFIC ending to this sometime?

Great story, Saskia!

Saskia

A lovely ending! So WAFFy!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Tricia

Nice to see the whole part

Sooo WAFFy

Next story?

Jose

Well, Sas, you already know I've really enjoyed this all the way, though I'm sure it wouldn't hurt to tell you again

you wrapped it up very nicely. I really liked Lois's reaction.

Overall, I think you've done a superb job

Cris

Hi,

Great story.

Sorry it took so long to respond, but I have been working on my graduation and have hardly taken time to do anything else. But all these fantastic comments have certainly made my week! It was one of the things that kept me going last week. You guys are all wonderful!

I'm glad you like that, Wendy. For me, the story wouldn't be ended without that. Otherwise it would still hang between them. They would address it at some point, so better now so it's a real ending. This is how I had pictured it from the start, only a few parts earlier. But I don't seem to be able to keep things short these days if I want them to be short.

I'm sorry, Chris, that's something you'll have to wait for a very long time then. I don't write Nfic, at least, not at this point in my life. Who knows what'll happen in the future.

And then there were my two favorite Spanish people:

Next? /me picks herself of the floor... You mean you still want more after this? Thanks! I'll see what I can do about your wishes, but don't expext anything some time soon.

Thanks for the wonderful comments, Laura, Wendy, Chris, Tricia, Jose, Cris and Maria!

Saskia