Great part.

Although I have to admit I can't wait to see when *Charlie* finally figures out who *Clark* is!!

Caryn

Great part!

Wonderful part!

Charlie hasn't changed much. He still wants, just like Clark, to spend the rest of his life with Lois.

I can't wait to find out what happens, when they both spill the beans. That'll sure be some eyeopenere for Charlie/Clark.


~Sira-chan

Oh great part. I'm just a WAFF nut! Hey worst case scenario, Charlie never gets back his memory, and he and Lois still live happily ever after.

JD

Wow, fantastic part!

Julia

Hi,

Great part.

Very nice! I love the sexual tension between them, very hot. Laura

What a story this is! I'm spellbound. I can't beleive you're just in the process of writing it. I can't imagine having to wait to read the next part. This is definately the best one of all the fanfic i've been reading!

I love their personalities. I love the changes. When i write more lcfanfic i want to use these characters! I love the easy going nature they've both got now. It's so much better than the anger they had so much of the time!

I love the way you write, the way you draw me in, the way you paint the setting, show me where they are, what they're feeling. It's so peaceful there on the ocean.

I'll bet you have to take more than a few minutes to write the next part, so i guess i'm not going to find it on here this morning. Darn darn darn. I'll just have to go get a life for as long as it takes you.

Nancy
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Nancy, I'm not in the process of writing this. It's done. I never post until I've finished writing. I'm not quite sure I could post and write at the same time. I like to hash everything out first.

Posting schedule is eratic because it's baseball season and I coach. We have games 5 nights a week, but I will try to get a part up in the morning. K?

As for all the nice comments, thank you very much.

SQD

This has been an interesting ride so far.

Things have gone along awfully smoothly though. There doesn't seem to be any villians on the horizon, so the 'conflict' will have to come from something else. Can't have the road to 'true love' run too smoothly now can we?

Good visuals, and setting.

Tank (who can't help but wonder whose name will be on her lips when Lois and 'Charlie' move to the inevitible throes of passion)

Gad, you nay-sayers and angst riders!!!! Let them be. Like was earlier mentioned, would be great if they could just fall in love and live happily ever after!!!!

But then I suppose it wouldn't be a whole story, now would it? Just a nice bit of fluff and waffiness.

Hey SDQ, I love it that they are happy. I will love it that they will get through whatever angst you have planned for them. Just biting my nails until that time I'm sure!

Pass the Maalox and Rolaids!!!

TEEEEEEJ

Oh, good. I only have to wait till tomorrow.
LaurieD