Clark was such a lunkhead when it came to telling Lois he was Superman.

That Clark is who I am, Superman is what I can do stuff---is bunk.

I wish he had told her the day he decided to become Superman.

Oh well..

See I'm aggravated because you left us with another cliffhanger!

ARHGHGHGH

Wendy, now there's the cliffhanger! LOL!


And this is so Lois.

Caryn (who's wondering what Lois will say to Clark's questions)

I'm loving this, Wendy <g> And now we've gotten to the 64 million dollar question... so get back here and give us the answer!

PJ

Yes, Wendy, I'd like the answer to that question, too.

I'll be away from my computer for a few days, so it doesn't matter when you post :p

gerry

Can't wait for more! So lovely and tender!
-Wanda

Aw poor Clark, that last bit almost made me cry for him. Poor baby! He wants to know what he is lacking. I can't wait to hear her tell him that it isn't what he doesn't have but what he does have. He has the ability to hurt her because she really cares for him. This is wondefful Wendy. More soon. Laura

Wendy

WOW, I love this!

Tricia

Give me a few secs to recover... This was amazing... It's so beautifully written and their emotions so easy to feel and understand. Gosh, Clark *is* such a sweet guy... can I keep him???

Excellent part, Wendy. With a not so excellent cliffhanger.. What is it with this fandom and evilness? Is it some kind of subliminal message? Or something you drink???

Looking forward to the last part

Cris

EEEERK! Clark just keeps spilling those beans. You guys make him so nice and sweet and easy to back off. I guess that was the draw of the TV show and why we all like him so much, but, dang, I can't help wondering if he'd have a lot less angst if he would just grab her up and lay one on her.

That's just my cavegirl going there!

Uggh! need more coffee!

TEEEEJ

I thought you weren't an evil person, Wendy... but two cliffhangers in three parts!!

Jose

What on earth could have given you that idea, Jose?

PJ
ducking & running

Wendy, I was quite charmed at Clark's reference to the original warning Lois gave him in the pilot, her startled denial that the warning still holds, and his hesitant question as to how she would react to that same "look" now. On the other hand, I have to admit that I mostly skimmed over Lois' musings, so I guess it was a little too long for me, just as it was for Clark.

Silly boy, dragging in Superman. Let's have the rest of it!

Hazel

I can't wait for the rest!

AnnaBtG.

This is the point where I always wonder why he didn't just leave her alone. In fact, there are episodes I never even watched because I couldn't stand to watch him grovel. So I give you big Kudos - because I can't wait to see how you resolve it.

I don't see what's wrong with the way Wendy ended this section. Seems perfect to me. What do you mean, cliffhanger? What do you mean, evil? Tutut. Perfect, I say! And no, not just because I happen to have read it all.

Fantastic premise, Wendy. I don't know how you do it, but you always manage to come up with a new angle for Lois and Clark's relationship. So... what do those men she dates have that Clark doesn't? Probably the incredible charm and sweetness that would many any woman fall in love with him. Happy sigh.

Kaethel

Hi,

Great part.

I've been reminded that I need to post part 3, so I'm back to thank you all very much for your lovely comments.

Pam and José, thank you for making me laugh out loud!



On the other hand, Kae says this:
Thank you, my friend! <g> You're so kind...

TEEEEEJ (did I get enough Es? <g> ) said:
Well, yes, but then he wouldn't be the Clark we know and love - or at least the Clark I know and love. But wait and see whether he carries on being like that in part 3!

And, on a similar theme, Ethnica says:
Well, I can promise you that he definitely won't grovel!

Hazel said:
Aww! Thank you! It occurred to me that whatever her motivation had been at the time she warned him off her, Lois might well feel differently now, some months on, and given that she now considers him a friend rather than some irritating nuisance she has to work with and who may be trying to hit on her. As for the introspection... well, you have to expect that with me.

Now, back to the question Clark asked Lois, Laura said:
Aww! And thank you!!

Well... you never know! Part 3 is coming right up, so you'll find out if you were right.

Thanks to all of you who posted comments!


Wendy