Hey Wendy!

I just loved it. It's so good to see Lois caring for Clark and for his powers at the same time.

It's better that Lex Luthor take care of himself because the hottest team in town will get him

Well done Wendy Now I just want more

Raquel (who likes Wendy's stories a lot)

But, but, but... it's so short! It was a good, solid, positive installment (with a noticeable lack of smoochies - grrr), but it was way too short! /me pouts

I guess I'll just have to wait for more.

Irene
who just might be cast as the pot calling the kettle black seeing as she's heard the same complaints about the installments of her own work in progress....

Hey Wendy...

Now that was worth a wait..

That's a excellent part... can't wait for more

It is great to know that Lois love flying with Clark...

More please soon... Very soon..

Meni

(now i can go and do my essay)

YAY!!!!!!! Wendy finally posted after lots of nagging on IRC.

But I'm very disappointed. You had a great oppurtunity for whams and again you miss it. What's happening to you? Too much influence from a certain person? I mean, if you had Kryptonite, of which I'm sure you have somewhere, you could have made Clark powerless. So he would have dropped Lois. Nice whammy.

And since that didn't happen, I'd have at least expected a smoochie. But nooo! No smoochies too. Where is this world going to if Wendy doesn't write this stuff anymore? :rolleyes:

So all I can say is that I want more. Now!!!!! /me deserves a reward for... well, I just do.

Saskia (still loving it very much, so don't worry. You just asked for comments like this)

Edit I moved my fdk, too bad the original title is lost now. Ah well. Next time better.

Wendy,

I love that Lois expects him to take her flying at least once a week. And I also love the thoughts that Clark was having about never flying with an attractive woman before.

It seems like they have Luthor caught like a sitting duck - but how are they going to explain knowing that he was there?

- Alicia

very sweet, wendy. i love the whole thing with clark being amazed at lois's acceptance and, more, enjoyment of his differences. it makes so much sense that he'd be scared about that (though i'm not at all surprised that she's enjoying the flight), given his history. and, without the suit, we have no real reason to expect him to be confident.

glad lois understood, too, and reacted well.

perfect.

nice touch, and a beautiful little interlude.

bit surprised that you said the LNN tower had come before the lexcorp building. i'd have expected the other way 'round.

glad they found luthor. nice "outside the box" thinking on lois's part. and, of course, good point about not being able to tell the police how they know where he is. of course they wouldn't have thought of it before, but of course it would be a problem.

i'm interested to see how lois handles it. "anonymous tip" or introduce the superhero or what?

very nice to see clark willing to trust her, though. on more than one count, too... trusting her not to give him away deliberately and trusting her not to give him away by accident. that can't be easy for him. good point, and well done.

absoltely love the last line, too. very sweet.

looking forward to part 21.

Paul

Yeah, what Paul said

This continues to be very cool... and I like the idea that Lex just went home to bed; he's a very confident (one might even say, arrogant) man and this seems very like him.

Love that Lois loves the powers. Love that Clark has processed that and is starting to understand that he doesn't face automatic revulsion from everyone. And I love that he trusts her, and says so.

Now, while Henderson is wrapping up the A-plot, let's get back to the important stuff <g>

PJ

Hi,

Great part.



:rolleyes: Normal!, Please.

Yes!!

More soon, please.

MAF

Ah nice flight Wendy! I hope they get Luthor soon! Of course a little kiss would be nice too<g> Laura

This was a good instalment for all the reasons that other gentle readers have already mentioned, but it can't have been written by Wendy Richards.

Where's the angst? Where's the gooey waffy kissy face stuff?

Could it be that some pod person has replaced Wendy? No, wait... Lois had long hair flying around in her face during the flight with Clark, it's Wendy all right.

Tank (who cheers on Saskia because we always need those who understand the true value of the good and nasty wham)

Wendy
excellent part - as expected
but I agree with Irene here
too short
more soon please
merry

Wendy

An excellent part!

I can't wait to see what happens next. I'm thoroughly enjoying this.

Tricia

Great installment Wendy!!
But I agree with everybody too..... no smoochies (darn! )

Keep up the great work!!

S (who's definitely not above begging for more soon!! Please?!)

Hey Wendy!

I've started reading this story a little late, via the TOC - I've just finished part 4, and wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying it so far. (I'm rather busy these days, so I'm pausing for now, but hopefully I will catch up before too long.)

I'll post more comments as I have time, but just wanted to let you know that this is shaping up to be a *very* promising longie, even though I've only gotten to the end of part 4. Keep up the good work!

Melisma (going back to reading, here under her Rock)

Well, Wendy, I wonder whether it will really be this simple. Will Lex really be caught now, or do you have something else up your sleeve? I guess it depends on how "long" you intend on this story becoming...

And as others have commented, I like the way the relationship between Clark and Lois is progressing, and the way that the trust is developing.

So maybe that's it. You'll wrap up the Lex stuff now, and then do another hundred pages or so on b-plot stuff. Okay, I can handle that.

KathyM

But trust is more than that?!

Okay Wendy, I printed this off and read it away from the computer. Excellent story!!!!!!!!!!

I really do get a kick out of seeing how many times authors have Lois creating Superman - in how many ways, I mean. It's really creative of all of you.

That said, please hurry up with the next part - I can't wait to see them catch Luthor, and I want to see Clark take Lois home to Mom, and to see Mom and Lois (I'm presuming that they are going to do it together) make his suit...

Melisma (frustrated under her Rock, at how many times she has mis-typed her own name tonight... wishing that the 's' and the 'm' keys were in the opposite places on the keyboard...)

Nice to see how well they work together. It all makes perfect sense. Now where's the weekend fix??? Mahhhhvelous.

More and soon,
Sherry

Well, it’s Sunday and so I’m back again. And again, many thanks for all your terrific comments on Part 20!


Irene said:
Too short??? Irene, you do know what’s coming...


And there are more complaints about the lack of smoochies:
Tank asking for smoochies???