Wow this is really getting exciting now. You go superman! I can't wait until he and Lois see each other next. Laura

Love the way Lois figured out Clark was Superman. Love the image of her sitting in her apartment sipping on a Margarita going "OMIGOD OMIGOD OMIGOD"!!! Hilarious!

This Superman has more backbone ...I like him!!

Loooking forward to #16

This is exciting! I finally caught up in the story today. You do a great job with everyone's banter and the chemistry between Lois and Clark. I'm looking forward to the next part!

Jen

That’s a great part . Please post soon, with so much happening I can’t wait to read more .
I wonder how Lois is doing, she sounds really shocked sitting alone saying OMIGOD

Hi,

Great part.

Another good instalment, Michael.

You keep treading that fine line between the comic book universe and the series universe, giving us the best of both.

Lois' revelation is hysterical, but she doesn't have too much invested in their friendship yet. I wonder what she is going to do with the knowledge?

I gather that the only reason Clark didn't take Wilson out right then was because he didn't know where the little girl was being kept. It would be fun to show how ineffectual Slade actually is when going up against someone like Superman by having Clark rescue the girl and take Slade out in a manner of moments.

Looking forward to more.

Tank (who wonders how long Michael has been reading the comic books)

Another fantastic part Michael

Looking forward to the next part!

Michael

An excellent part! Please post the next part soon.

Tricia