Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/11/04 06:25 PM
Feedback is definitely appreciated, especially on the intentional typos. Should I keep all of them in or fix a couple?
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/11/04 07:04 PM
Hi,
Cute story.
Cute story.
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/11/04 09:39 PM
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Mr. White trailed off, telling a story about his favorite rock star, who had not really died after all, but was currently the governor of California once they found him alive.
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/11/04 11:26 PM
Cute story. 
No one will believe him after that. 
Was this slip deliberate? I love it.
Ines
No one will believe him after that. Quote
Kent did his best to look like he was paying attention, but his attention wanders to Lois, who was the love of his life. They were going to get married someday, he just knew it.
Ines
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 04:11 AM
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Was this slip deliberate? I love it
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 05:09 AM
Very cute, in a horribly bad way 
Kind of a shame she didn't get the clue, though... when this Lois *does* find out CK=S, she's gonna be kicking herself!
PJ
Kind of a shame she didn't get the clue, though... when this Lois *does* find out CK=S, she's gonna be kicking herself!
PJ
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 05:20 AM
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 06:15 AM
AAAAAAARGH! Lois is galactically stupid!!! I really thought she would be getting the hint.
Great story, Emily!
I love it!!
Any chance of a third 'part'? Please?
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Great story, Emily!
I love it!!Any chance of a third 'part'? Please?
See ya,
AnnaBtG.
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 07:00 AM
LOL, Emily! And such a great revelation... even though it wasn't! As Anna so succinctly put it, Aaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!
- Vicki
PS - in answer to your question, keep all the typos.
And such a great revelation... even though it wasn't! As Anna so succinctly put it, Aaaaaaaaaaaaaargh!- Vicki
PS - in answer to your question, keep all the typos.
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 08:08 AM
ROFL, Emily!! Terrific job!
Yes, do leave the typos in - actually, I almost expected more, and more tense switches, homophones, misplaced apostrophes and so on. But nice work!!
Wendy
Yes, do leave the typos in - actually, I almost expected more, and more tense switches, homophones, misplaced apostrophes and so on. But nice work!!
Wendy
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 09:18 AM
Truly awful.
James
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/12/04 06:48 PM
Oh yeah. Terrible. Worse than Lois' badfic.
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/13/04 08:36 AM
Come on!! :rolleyes: How can't she see it?!!! 
Jose
Jose
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/13/04 11:30 PM
Emily
This is great. LOL!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Tricia
This is great. LOL!
I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Tricia
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/18/04 01:52 PM
I love it, Em!!!
Don't change the "Lois" typo--I think it's brilliant! *grin*
-Wanda
Don't change the "Lois" typo--I think it's brilliant! *grin*
-Wanda
Re: Feedback -- Kent Stu - 04/18/04 02:03 PM
Thanks. I kept the Lois typo. I might use it in a sequel. After all, Lois should eventually figure out my/Clark's Fredudian slip.