Hi,
Great story!
I don't feel this is finish.
I just have one word:
S E Q U E L
I told you, SQD, this piece breaks all my fic reading rules. In general, anything that comes too close to real life- real kids, real problems, real pain, I just blow by.
Now, if it's kryptonite or time-travel, I'm there.
That said, this was compulsively readable. I was just sucked in and pulled along.
And the finish was so gentle and sweet. I gotta say, it hit me right in my hard, angst-loving heart!
So nicely done.
What's next?<g>
CC
Fabulous and a balanced content of emotional drama along with a few laughs and tears
Great story
, I’m feeling a bit speechless here so I don’t know what to say except
.
Is that really the end of the story? Maybe there will be a sequel?
Great ending, SQD!
I absolutely loved this story. I absolutely love how you created Robin as so real that I could see him before my eyes. I love how despite the urge to consider Lois his new mom, Kim is not forgotten and that makes it a lot more plausible.
Julie
Wonderfull story!!!
I loved it right from the beginning. Usually I wait until a story is finished before I read it, but this one had me hooked and there was no escape.
So, are you sure, the story is finished? I could easily read more of this.
Ines
Beautiful story!
And original: Lois became psychologically a mother *before* Clark became a father.
Yet, I believe Robin wouldn't have wanted to call Lois just the same as he called his own Mommy. Or is there no other names for Mother in English?
Lovely finish SQD, and so sweet.
They are truly a family in every sense of the word. Robin is a very lucky boy and I was so happy that he got his Christmas wishes!
I'm not one to push for sequels, but it would be neat to revisit this when Robin's 'super' genes start to develop? Maybe when he is a teenager?
Thanks for a great story.
~Liz
Great story and wonderful ending, SQD!
Your portrait of Robin is so real and adorable. And the relantionship between Lois and Clark very moving.
Thanks,
Sil
Nice job, Robin. The growth of the relationships between Lois, Clark and Robin was nicely done with believable ambivalences and pitfalls.
Laurie D
Robin
great story - I loved it
just got caught up - I've been reading like mad today - I'm so far behind
I'm sorry I haven't posted after each segment.
merry