FDK: Do-Over - 02/23/14 09:18 PM
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/23/14 10:21 PM
Oooooooh. That's evil. 
Delightfully, so. I love it! I think what that time traveler needs though is a more aggressive Clark Kent in S1, and suddenly Utopia happens all the more quickly. 
It would be ironic, wouldn't it? 
Terrific!
Delightfully, so. I love it! I think what that time traveler needs though is a more aggressive Clark Kent in S1, and suddenly Utopia happens all the more quickly. It would be ironic, wouldn't it? Terrific!
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/23/14 11:49 PM
1/1? 
Moving onward, a delightful tale but it cries out for sequels. If you don't want to write sequels perhaps you could post it as challenge.
Moving onward, a delightful tale but it cries out for sequels. If you don't want to write sequels perhaps you could post it as challenge.
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/24/14 01:02 AM
That was just a teaser! It is a beginning, please more. I like the idea of Clark knowing about the future and trying to change it to stop Luthor, a new challenge between them!!
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/24/14 02:42 AM
Great! Who knows how many times Tempus has rebooted history?
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/24/14 12:24 PM
Ah, Tempus. He never knows when to give up, does he? 
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/24/14 01:45 PM
Great! And so the story begins (again)....
Yeah, Clark knowing the future could be a really interesting take on the season playing out
Laura
Yeah, Clark knowing the future could be a really interesting take on the season playing out
Laura
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/24/14 03:52 PM
Queenie! You always do this! Great one-shot!
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/25/14 08:28 PM
Thanks for the positive response, guys. 
I know it sort of...dangles. Sorry. To be honest, I just haven't had the time or energy for longer stories, and frankly, there are so many directions this could go in that perhaps a challenge is the best solution.
Any takers?
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Originally posted by Framework4:
1/1?
Moving onward, a delightful tale but it cries out for sequels. If you don't want to write sequels perhaps you could post it as challenge.
1/1?
Moving onward, a delightful tale but it cries out for sequels. If you don't want to write sequels perhaps you could post it as challenge.
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Originally posted by Annalina19:
That was just a teaser! It is a beginning, please more. I like the idea of Clark knowing about the future and trying to change it to stop Luthor, a new challenge between them!!
That was just a teaser! It is a beginning, please more. I like the idea of Clark knowing about the future and trying to change it to stop Luthor, a new challenge between them!!
Any takers?
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 02/26/14 08:13 AM
Nice story! If Clark keeps messing up, will Tempus keep rescuing him from the cage? I can see this as a sort of "Ground Hog's Day" loop.
Re: FDK: Do-Over - 03/23/14 11:16 AM
Hi Queenie!
Hmm…wonder what that’s about… Tempus? Fates?
Ooooh!
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Tempus?
So Tempus! The wedding, sickening marriage, and the bratty kids of course refer to Season 4 and beyond. Oh boy.
Michael
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Do-Over (1/1)
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...and blinked as the space before his eyes shimmered.
A man stood in front of him, extending a hand. “Mr. Kent, come with me if you want to live.”
A man stood in front of him, extending a hand. “Mr. Kent, come with me if you want to live.”
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“I'm a time-traveler,” the man told him, turning to retrieve the key.
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“I can send you back,” the man continued. “You can do things right, this time; fix history so there's no cage, no wedding, and no sickening marriage with bratty kids.”
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...and found himself shaking the firm grip of Perry White.
“Clark Kent, welcome to the Daily Planet.”
The Beginning/End
“Clark Kent, welcome to the Daily Planet.”
The Beginning/End
Michael