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Posted By: mariadferdez. FDK:Chip Off the Old Clark 12/14 - 03/04/04 06:30 PM
Hi,

Great part. drool

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Still, Clark often thought of finding a bigger place. He and Lois had even begun looking. They would have liked to have found something before the wedding and Christmas, but there just hadn't been enough time. The first part of the New Year had been set aside to find a new apartment. For now, their cozy place would have to do.
They need a Brownstone. laugh

confused He still call him Clark not dad.

More ASAP, please.

MAF drool
Posted By: ChaaBreh Re: FDK:Chip Off the Old Clark 12/14 - 03/04/04 07:33 PM
Awwww.....now there's only 2 parts left. You MUST have a sequel! I want to know how Robin's going to handle his emerging powers.

This story makes you want to go out and adopt a kid@!!!

Great job.
Posted By: daneel Re: FDK:Chip Off the Old Clark 12/14 - 03/05/04 12:02 AM
Wonderful vision of a father-son moments smile

more!!

Jose smile1
Posted By: Pennyfeather Re: FDK:Chip Off the Old Clark 12/14 - 03/05/04 01:03 AM
Wonderfull part, SQD!! smile1

Ines
Posted By: Gabriele Re: FDK:Chip Off the Old Clark 12/14 - 03/05/04 05:36 AM
The scene between father and son was great.

In addition, there are couple of things. I don't quite understand when Lois says that she is falling in love with Robin. Then she could also stop loving him. However, mother's love is different from the love between lovers or spouses.

No cries nor firework, uh? Was it because they were careful not to disturb Robin?

I find it also strange that Robin could see their bed in the morning. What if he wakes in the middle of the night? I think they need more privacy.

Hope they have honeymoon *alone*.
Posted By: kb Re: FDK:Chip Off the Old Clark 12/14 - 03/05/04 03:34 PM
Great part thumbsup

I thought they were getting married before Christmas? confused
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