FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/12/13 10:34 PM
Poem feedback goes here....thanks 
Re: FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/12/13 10:42 PM
Brilliant!
I loved how you managed to include so many lines from the show.
Favourite part -
Thanks for sharing,
Corrina.
I loved how you managed to include so many lines from the show.
Favourite part -
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They worked together. They became friends.
Clark was in love--did she know?--that depends.
They kissed in a plane. They kissed in a hotel.
It was only for work (but it went over well).
Clark was in love--did she know?--that depends.
They kissed in a plane. They kissed in a hotel.
It was only for work (but it went over well).
Corrina.
Re: FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/12/13 11:37 PM
Welcome to the boards!
Well done!
You managed to get all the positives of their relationship while skipping over all the negatives. Plus, you got all those lines of dialogue to fit and even rhyme. I'm impressed.
I like this passage. It describes well why they held back their true feelings.
I think you want "lose" here, not "loose".
What a nice romantic tribute. Thanks for sharing.
Well done!
You managed to get all the positives of their relationship while skipping over all the negatives. Plus, you got all those lines of dialogue to fit and even rhyme. I'm impressed. Quote
Their feelings--they kept secret, hidden away...
Because they were best friends, and worked together each day.
Because they were best friends, and worked together each day.
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Clark feared he'd loose Lois--couldn't take that chance...
What a nice romantic tribute. Thanks for sharing.
Re: FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/13/13 03:44 AM
I am in total agreement with Virginia - Welcome to the boards!
Poetry is the food of love and your effort sweetly describes Lois and Clark. Thanks for bringing this poem out from your personal archive!
Poetry is the food of love and your effort sweetly describes Lois and Clark. Thanks for bringing this poem out from your personal archive!
Re: FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/17/13 03:13 PM
Thank you for the warm welcome--it means a lot! ...And also, thank you for all of the wonderful feedback! I was a bit nervous about posting, but it was so rewarding to hear comments about something I created. What a fun/awesome process 
Corrina--that was one of my favorite parts, too--favorite line being '(but it went over well)'....
Virginia--you were correct about the 'lose'/'loose' observation...never caught that
Thanks!
Morgana--now the 'personal archive' is depleted, writing-wise...have to get busy, I guess!
Getting positive feedback from you all was amazing, thank you! Definitely gets me thinking about starting a story....hmmm
Laura
Corrina--that was one of my favorite parts, too--favorite line being '(but it went over well)'....
Virginia--you were correct about the 'lose'/'loose' observation...never caught that
Thanks!Morgana--now the 'personal archive' is depleted, writing-wise...have to get busy, I guess!
Getting positive feedback from you all was amazing, thank you! Definitely gets me thinking about starting a story....hmmm
Laura
Re: FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/17/13 08:46 PM
This was such a great poem! I agree -- it's amazing how many lines from the show you got in this (not to mention making it rhyme! 
). Thanks for posting it!
Has it really already been 20 years since Lois and Clark debuted? Wow...
). Thanks for posting it!Has it really already been 20 years since Lois and Clark debuted? Wow...
Re: FDK: Partnership, Friendship, & Love... - 09/17/13 09:18 PM
Ultra Lucille--thanks for the feedback ...really appreciate it!
Yep, 20 years last Thursday--it premiered Sept. 12, 1993....hard to believe, isn't it? I was 13 in 1993 when I first saw it--can not believe it's been around for 20 years already. It definately has held up well though through the years
...really appreciate it!Yep, 20 years last Thursday--it premiered Sept. 12, 1993....hard to believe, isn't it? I was 13 in 1993 when I first saw it--can not believe it's been around for 20 years already. It definately has held up well though through the years