Comments if you please! This story had me smiling writing it, so I hope we do get to see a lot more WAFF this month. I could definitely go for some!

Awwwwww!

It seemed so much like Perry to set this "dinner party" up and then not show at the last minute. Sneaky editor...er... mayor.

I like how much like S1 Lois your alt-Lois is, but without the anger. Hesitant, shy, cautious, babbling brookish (in the talking before thinking way).

And Clark's just in 7th heaven. Patient. Very nice.

I was surprised to see Cat with Jimmy, but I guess him being rich and owner of the DP made up for him being much, much younger.

I wish I could write patience like you wrote Clark's, but since I don't have any (unless you count procrastination on housework), my characters usually don't either.

Thanks for breaking out of your evil shell and showing us your soft underbelly! I was afraid I wouldn't be getting any more takers and everyone would go evil on me. (We've got enough Evil in RL at the moment, I'll take comedy and WAFF in my stories where I can get it). I hope your dinner party ended with a nice kiss too.

Hi Mouserocks,

What is this world coming to? You're writing WAFF and I'm writing EVIL! Maybe May is really topsy-turvy (Or, as my favourite bard wrote, 'tapsalteerie' -- love that term) month.

In any event, you do write WAFF quite well.

Joy,
Lynn

Hi Mouse,

A woderfully WAFFy story.

Go girl!

Thanks for a great story. I always thought it was a shame that they couldn't explore alt-Clark's world more in the series. Are there more alt-L&C stories hoping to come out and play?

Mouse!

See, writing WAFFY is not that hard, you do it so well. Excellent story. Alt-Clark is happy even comfortable being a public figure although he is a private person.

The interaction between Cat and James is a hoot! This is the one and only time I have ever seen them together, despite the fact that they are 'cousins'. Really neat idea.

Lois is the Lois who should have been had Claude not shown up.

Brilliantly written. Please, let's see more WAFFY from your pen, you have a gentle gift for it.

I really enjoyed it. The slow growth of romance, culminating in the kiss.... well done.

However, I mis-read the title of the story as "The Donner Party". That would have been a downer.

Great story Mouse.

That would have been quite the twist, now wouldn't it? Sometimes I wouldn't put it past me.

Glad you enjoyed it! I kind of wanted this Lois to be less angry and more subdued but otherwise like S1 Lois. Didn't think about whether or not Claude was involved, but being caught in the Congo for a year and a half kind of broke her spirit a little bit. Didn't want to get too much into that in a WAFFy story, but I'm glad it came across that her experiences/lack thereof shaped her.

Dunno. Maybe. Glad you liked it.

Thanks! Oddly enough, I was drinking a Go Girl energy drink when I was writing this/doing homework... Where are you...

Thanks! It is kind of bizarro, isn't it? Don't worry, I'll be switching back onto the evil track soon enough, and hopefully things will be righted. Of course, I still might post more WAFF for the month...

Glad you liked it! i figured if anyone deserved some WAFF, it was him.
Glad that came across all right. I was worried I was just gonna end up making them too weak or something.

Hey, even Cat can't change that much. And I'm sure Jimmy doesn't have a problem with it...

Thanks

I don't kiss and tell... But nah. We're still kind of dancing around each other.

Glad you liked!

And to add to the Bizarro nature of this month, Female Hawk wrote a story that was both short and evil.

Please do post more WAFF.

Joy,
Lynn

I enjoyed the story. It's nice to see a happy ending for alt-Clark.

When Clark mentioned that Perry and Alice weren't going to make it, I thought that Jimmy and his date were going to cancel, too, leaving Lois feeling incredibly awkward. I like that she had Cat there as a friend that she already knew. I can't imagine their relationship before Lois's disappearance was overly friendly, but I'm sure they were happy to see each other, and any previous animosity could easily be overlooked under the circumstances. Their interactions were well done.

Hi Mouse!


Aww, S1 Lois after Clark rescued her from Mr. Makeup?



I didn’t remember this line on first reading.

Awwwww

Michael