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What a fun story.

I had suspected fairly early on that Clark had been a dog, but I had been confused by the "travelling *man*" reference. Of course, with confirmation of the transformation came the realization that even in a canine body, Clark was still thinking of himself as a human.

That line was the icing on the cake.

Thanks for the smiles,
Lynn

At the beginning I thought that Clark was wandering around with most of his memory missing post-Nightfall. I was thinking it was significant that Clark hadn't talked, but him being a dog hit me out of left field. I had to go re-read the beginning before I could finish it. Cute story.

Another hit for April comedy!

Cute! It seemed a bit in your face cockiness for Clark, but he'd been a dog for 2 years because of Lex, so I allowed him some leeway.

+1 for the great line!

Also, congrats for posting a dog story! That seems to be a theme here in April Comedy.

Thanks everybody.

I liked the start, although it took me awhile to realize that Clark was not just some bum.

I still did not clue in that he was not just some bum. I think you want to say "Started".

I was sure Lois was menat.

I think by now I was suspecting he might now be human, despite "traveling man" being said at the start.

At this point I decided he was a dog. I figured he was just a dog named Clark though. I had no noticed the "fuzzy memory" line at the start.


Reading it a second time, this line makes perfect sense.

I should have realized what happened here. However I just figured that either a-she wass thinking about a dog in both places or b-the real Clark had gone, and this dog was also Clark. Maybe new Krypton took longer than expected.

He was removed from the picture quickly.

I just realized something. Is there no Superman in this universe? Is this a Superman free LnC story?

This makes a lot of sense in a Superman-free universe.

You know, I am not sure why I assumed he was a dog, but that was definately my assumption all along. I guess cats don't do much begging, and no other animal would work either.

At first I was wondering if he realized he was a dog. However then I realized it was probably more that he did not realize he was not always a dog. Or as a dog the whole issue was too complexed for him to full grasp either way.

I thin you wanted to say "he'd" here.

I think you want Lois to open her statement with See.

I think just "beside him" works, no need for the of.

Same here.

Whispers, "I think you want to end the quote after one. The next sentance describes Lois's actions.

The rest of the story was fun too. I especially liked Lois sending Luthor to a shelter that would give him proper pre-adoption treatment.

Post Nightfall?

Huh.

Don’t remember where exactly but I started thinking dog around here somewhere.

Poor guy, trying to grab hold of his tail in front of the women he adores.

Michael

VERY cute!

Thanks everybody.

First:
Note to Self - never post another story without a beta. Arggghhhh.... So many mistakes. I still find it amazing that a person sometimes doesn't see their own mistakes that they'd never miss in someone else's story. I think that comes from reading the story over and over (to try to find those very mistakes).

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Clark was confused and wasn't quite sure what was going on.

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Yep, I wanted Lex to have no doubt that Clark knew what he had done and that he was no longer a dog.

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Yes, it's Superman free. Maybe I'll do a little sequel about that.

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Hehe... "Left over" from being a dog.

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I just read this on the archives, and it was hilarious! It took me a while to figure out that Clark was a dog.

I love the ending -- Lex turning into a dog and being sent to a shelter where the dogs are all neutered.

Thanks for sharing this funny story!!

Thank you very much!