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Sorry this has taken so long; RL has been hectic. Tomatoes go here.

Laura
Laura,

Another great part. I'm glad that Clark let Rachel help with Jamie, hopefully she'll come to realise that L&C aren't going to send her back and she can trust them enought to be able to tell Clark what she saw. I can completely understand her desire to protect her parents. Especially given what she's been through.

Trying to picture Superman herding up cattle brought a smile to my face. laugh

Hope it's not as long before we see the next part! smile

Loriel
I'm too much of a wimp to actually read this story <g> but I wanted to say, Happy Birthday, Laura smile

PJ
Hey, I didn't know it was your birthday! thumbsup

Pam, you're missing a fantastic read!
Good part!! smile

More soon!! smile1

Jose wave

P.S. Happy Birthday! laugh
I just realized that it didn't post the whole thing. Unfortunately, I don't have a copy of it on me, so I'll fix it after I get home tonight. Thanks for still being interested after all this time.

Laura
Hi,

Great part. thumbsup She getting a long with the baby.

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"So you *do* care about him," he said with a smirk. Papa Gary stubbed his cigarette out on her arm. Rachel suppressed a cry of pain as he motioned to someone that she couldn't see, and the person who hurt the little boy in the park came in and smiled at Rachel.

"What have you got there?" the person asked.

Rachel hid Jamie behind her and shook her head, refusing to answer. Papa Gary grabbed her arms and threw her towards the wall. His new friend came up to the bed and smiled. "A little boy... just what I was looking for."
OMG! What a nightmare! eek

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Rachel tugged her nightgown back into place and sighed. "Peoples are *mean*," she said. "They'll hurt us if we let them, but we can't act like we know that. If they know that we know, the hurting will get worse."

"I know," she whispered, "because Papa Gary got meaner when I cried. Other peoples will, too, because they're like *him*."
This is starting to worry me. She can influence little Jimmy when he grew up.

confused Can Clark a tune to Rachel in his sleep to hear what she said?

More ASAP, please.

MAF wink
Happy Birthday Laura! thumbsup

~Liz
Hi Laura,

Rachel is such a great little character. I can't wait to read more about her. smile

Please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.

Hope you had a Happy Birthday,
Yours Jenni
Laura

This is so heartwrenching. whinging
I hope she realizes soon that she can trust Lois and Clark completely. She needs to tell them what happened.

I look forward to reading the next part.

Hope you had a great birthday! party

Tricia cool
Laura,
catching up again
good part
Happy Birthday
merry
God, this is soooooooooooooo sad mecry mecry mecry

Rachel is such a great little kid and I love reading about her. Please make her feel better and finally trust Lois and Clark COMPLETLY, so they can work this out.

Happy Birthday,

Julia
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