Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 01:51 PM
Thoughts? Concerns? Queries about whether or not I had amnesia? 
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 02:00 PM
Elle, welcome back!!!!
And I loved this. Giggled most of the way through it! Starting here:
And you've got their banter down perfectly:
Poor Lois! Will Lois and Clark ever manage to have a normal wedding? 
Loved the last few paras, by the way.
Can't wait for more!
Wendy
And I loved this. Giggled most of the way through it! Starting here:
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Lois' expression darkened a moment later, and Clark began to wonder if the person on the other end of the line realized the longer they tried to reason with a Lois Lane hell bent on being right, the closer they stepped to needing a new job. "Excuse me? Haven't you ever heard of the customer always being right? I want to speak with your manager!"
And you've got their banter down perfectly:
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"Not yet, but give it five years, and I'll probably be popping an aspirin every time a breaking story comes in and consulting my therapist about my stress level once a week. And I'll stick my nose in where it doesn't belong and - "
"Lois, you do that already."
"I do?" Lois' eyes widened. "Do I pry too much into your life, Clark? I do, don't I?"
Clark fought back a grin. "Lois, you're a reporter. You have three Kerth awards because you're nosey."
"Lois, you do that already."
"I do?" Lois' eyes widened. "Do I pry too much into your life, Clark? I do, don't I?"
Clark fought back a grin. "Lois, you're a reporter. You have three Kerth awards because you're nosey."
Loved the last few paras, by the way. Can't wait for more!
Wendy
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 02:15 PM
Wendy already nabbed all my favorite lines. 
So I'll just say ditto, and note that there are only 3 more days in January. 
Welcome back, Elle!
So I'll just say ditto, and note that there are only 3 more days in January. Welcome back, Elle!
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 03:05 PM
Elle, this is just great 
Just like Wendy I had to giggle all the way through. Poor Lois, she's at the edge to sheer madness.
Please let them have a perfect, romantic wedding with the result that they are actually married, ok?
Oh, and that ASAP!
Julia
Just like Wendy I had to giggle all the way through. Poor Lois, she's at the edge to sheer madness.
Please let them have a perfect, romantic wedding with the result that they are actually married, ok?
Oh, and that ASAP!
Julia
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 03:13 PM
Hi,
Welcome back!
Welcome back!
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 05:32 PM
Cute story.
You've definitely nailed an anxious and stressed Lois.
As was pointed out, there are only three days left in January.
Tank (who wonders how this story is going to enhance Elle's evil in training)
You've definitely nailed an anxious and stressed Lois.
As was pointed out, there are only three days left in January.
Tank (who wonders how this story is going to enhance Elle's evil in training)
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 07:13 PM
Ditto the others. I couldn't stop laughing from the beginning to the end.
Loved it. When are you next posting?
metwin1
Loved it.
When are you next posting? metwin1
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/28/04 08:14 PM
Really sweet loved it. I am looking forward to the next part. Laura
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/29/04 05:59 PM
Loving it.
Uh, it's the 29th.
Uh, it's the 29th.
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 01/30/04 11:43 AM
Just caught up and I have to say you are right on the money with this. I can practically 'hear' Lois' voice.
Can't wait for more!
~Liz
Can't wait for more!
~Liz
Re: Comments: STG, TTIR Part 2 - 02/01/04 04:26 AM
Elle,
So glad he's back. And will Lois!
I loved Lois on the phone to the Wedding Invitation people.
Loriel
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Clark knew to tread lightly when the first thing he heard when entering the newsroom was a frustrated Lois Lane.
I loved Lois on the phone to the Wedding Invitation people.
Loriel