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Drs. M'Benga and Bashir?

Love the Star Trek references! smile1

As fara as I'm concerned this has been the best chapter in the entire story!!!

Each segment was beautifully written and explained. I especially enjoyed Lois mentally preparing to face her attackers. The discussion of muscle memory was perfect.

The story is very engrossing! Keep it up!
Hi Morgana,

I’m glad you are appreciating this story. smile1 And I appreciate your comments. clap

In all of my ‘action’ scenes I do strive for accuracy and completeness. I want the reader to be able to picture the moves in their mind as if they were watching a movie. Having been a practitioner of the martial arts for most of my life, I do have some experience I can bring to bear. evil
Another three months or so until completion? OK... smile1
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