Wow, my first time that I go first with the comments

Great little story

You set a very oppressing mood here. It all seemed so final, but I guess we can always count on our hero to save the day, can't we?

Keep 'em coming your little vignettes with the unpredictable endings I like so much.

Julia

Hi,

Sweet story.

Love it.

MAF

Wonderful!

Jose

Wow she just got up and started dusting! lOL Well I would think she'd be a little more joyous then that but the story was pretty good anyway. Laura

That was nice! I like how Clark is the one to save the world

Also liked the opening scene. Very beautiful.

Keep writing.
See ya,
AnnaBtG.

Martha just goes to do the dusting because she was at peace with the idea of dying. Sure, she'd rather be alive, but they had resigned themselves to the idea and were calm and collected about it.

Um, isn't he always?

lucyolsen

That was great. I like the tone you set and Martha's thoughts about not wanting her son to be okay if everyone else were to die. It was very thought provoking.
~Lauren

Great job.

Those lines were really powerful for me, in particular.

Jen

Lucy
nice story
merry