Okay, guys, the black SUV people followed me to the local Chinese food place this afternoon when I went to pick up lunch. I got threatened with a pint of shrimp lo mein!

This is slowly morphing into a Wednesday/Saturday posting schedule, isn't it?

Never mind the new schedule.

I don't quite know yet what to make of today's chapter, it's certainly interesting - only I can't believe that Kal's victory will be without dire consequences. The Uthor family is not known for taking defeat honorably, is it?

(Also, I have no idea who that Dr. K'lin is supposed to be, but did I read right and you got Bruce Wayne into your story? )

The kryptonian version of Dr. Bernard Klein.

Ruce A'ne, also known as Krypto Bat.

Super Kal won without even practicing. Kudos to him. But surely Nor won't accept defeat graciously...

Andreia

Yaaay.... though somehow I feel this won't be the last we hear from Lord Nor....

I recognized B. Klein, but missed Bruce-baby. Although I thought I should be recognizing him. I hope he helps Kal and Lois solve the mystery about the missing women from the house of Uthor.

Nor Uthor! There's a scary combination of forces.

"I hear on Earth, they don't do that. We should have run away together when we could, Kal."

My gosh! Jor-El was captain of the football... er.... drei team and he ended up a serious scholar, a playboy, and peace-advocate for sons. No wonder they disappoint him. AND no grandchildren! What had he done wrong as a father?

Kissing is good. I guess it works both ways. He kisses her to stop her from babbling, she kisses him when he's stressed.

Oh, la, la. Nice kiss.

<<cough, cough>> Um... DC... missing something from your story there?? LIKE a WHOLE POSTING PART or at least a paragraph... or something? Reaction? Thoughts? A dance? A high-five with Jai? SOMETHING? <<cough>> Didn't Kal say something about not wanting to tire himself out before the big match?

/Pst. Michael, I was wrong. IMG do count towards the Graemlin total. <<smacks own face, since I'm out of smilies>>/

FDK - Part 2

Let's see where was I? Right...

Now, back to you story.... ...

So, no romance in this part, huh. Hmmm. And here, I was hoping the battle in the title part might refer to a banterfest. Darn. You meant a REAL battle. Thus enters A-Plot.

I'm with Lois here. Let's skip the battle and stay in bed!

What? That it took Kal 6 months to consumate his marriage? Yep!

My, Samm really did sequester his girls. Nice sport. So, Rao is a bloodthirsty god?

And it might not have anything to do with Nor, it could have been Lux. I mean, the man's wife DID die.

Yep, I'm guessing no search warrents allowed on Krypton, either.

Really? "Most beloved Jor-El"? Really?

What? This event goes on for another day? No wonder this world explodes.

<<Shock>> KAL!

Week? So totally missed this reference to Bruce! I knew he must be someone, but couldn't figure out who.

Oh, this isn't going to be good. Kal, you should have waited to consumate your marriage. Don't you know virgins NEVER die in horror movies?

Of course, on the other hand, did he really want to die a virgin? Probably not.

<<Shock>> Kal, you're lying to the Mrs.!

Okay, a groin shot. What does it take to be disqualified from this event anyway? For a fighter to KILL someone? That seems a little extreme, before intervention. Neither Nor or Lux are going to be happy with this, you know that, right? They are going to say Kal cheated. And enact vengence. And if you're going to tick off some noble family the Uthor family aren't the ones to anger, right?

Let me guess. It's going to be contested by the Uthor family and a rematch will be demanded? A rematch where Nor cheats? Or tries to kill Kal? Or kidnaps Lois and holds her hostage until Kal makes a dive? And of course, Daddy dearest (that would be Jor-El Daddy) is going to say, "Nice job, son. It doesn't really count since you hit him in the crotch though."

Ooooh. I see evilness ahead in this story. Time for a romantic interlude as Lois nurses Kal back to health?

I don't have any black SUVs but I do still have that guy with the ax (from the top of the post) on payroll. And a box of tomatoes is arriving soon. So, ROMANCTIC INTERLUDE?

Hi, Lara!

Dr. Bard K'lin = Dr. Bernard Klein. And yes, you read that correctly. Batman is in the house!

The Uthor family? Be nice? Hmm....

Thanks for sticking with this!

The kryptonian version of Dr. Bernard Klein.

Ruce A'ne, also known as Krypto Bat.

Super Kal won without even practicing. Kudos to him.

Yup, you got Ruce and Dr. K'lin correct! Krypto Bat. I like it!

Will Kal's win have consequences? Stay tuned to find out...

Hi, ML!

You would be (very possibly) correct...

Thanks for staying with this!

Oooh, Virginia is here too!

Well, we also haven't gotten to see him prior to the whole marriage thing really. But even this verison of Clark loves helping people.

"We're going to need another Trey!"



Nope, I figured the readers were in the "need to know" category.

On an unrelated note, the palace usage of cold water was up 122%.

Well, considering that they've only been getting along for 2-3 months...

Huh. I swear, I didn't make that connection. I was thinking more along the lines of the Ren. Faires I like to go to in October. :p

Erm...

Bingo!



Precisely!

Thank you.

I played with it, but nothing sounded quite right to me, and sometimes, a reader's imagination needs to roam free?

(Note: I originally thought of posting this chapter on the *other* side of the boards, but my muse had other plans.)

Sex doesn't count. Besides, it's more important that Kal stop being such a v...very patient prince.

Not intentionally...Okay, maybe a little.



Erm...not quite.

How about most of a chapter?

<hides under the bed>

Reading the other FDK was very enlightening. I caught the Dr. Klein, but knowing that it was you, Vicki, I just assumed that the Bruce was Bill Church, Jr. So, now I know that you can think of other Bruces. <bg>

You snuck in a little light loving, huh? No wonder Kal wanted to get the match over...he was in a hurry to get back to his honeymoon. And poor Lois, having to watch that perfect body and face get mauled! Enough to make any woman take a dull hatchet to her hubby's attacker. I thought you showed a lot of restraint!

Keep up the good work.
Pat

Wow, that was a whirlwind. I would have liked a bit more reaction to making love the first time. Maybe an nfic section or at least how it was for them. The fight was interesting too. I am glad they are finally truly husband and wife. Laura

Well, there is no Bruce like Bruce Campbell, that's for sure. (Except for, well, my Dad.)

I did try to sneak in a little waffy-loving before throwing poor Kal to Nor. But I agree that a dull axe would be too good of a punishment for what Nor did!

Duly noted. I'm taken up the matter with my muse, and am patiently awaiting to see what she might churn out between now and the time I polish it for the archive.

Thanks!

Shooting stars and finally a full and loving marriage. I like the 'closed doors' scene of their lovemaking, adds a bit of mystery.

Glad to see Lois is spending more time with the rest of the family. She is a happier person now that's she part of a close knit family.

Lux Uthor son's are now on the scene, can Daddy and his usual machinations be far behind? I was interesting to see Nor as Lux's son and that he has a nasty habit of permanently dismissing those who displease him. This is where the focus of the story is off Lois and Kal and turned onto external matters.

Ruce A'ne? Now that's different! When do we get to see more of this close friend of the royal family? Love Dr. K'lin making an appearance as well, maybe he can find a way to fix Kal's trick knee? Which brings me to another thought. Kyrpton's technology should be waay better than what we are seeing here...just a thought.

This has been a great chapter and as always I await more!

Ut oh, hitting below the belt!

Naughty, naughty.

I agree with MrsLuthor: Nor is evil

Be careful, Kal.

Hi, Morgana!

Thanks! I'm still puttering with the idea of expanding that a little bit.

Very much so.

Not much good can come of that, huh?

Ruce will be back, I promise. I have toyed a little with the technology...not sure yet if I will alter some of this before prepping for the archive.

Thanks so much!

Man's gotta do what a man's gotta do. Especially against someone ruthless.

I agree with MrsLuthor: Nor is evil

Nope, Lord Nor is not to be taken lightly...

So, winter is coming, then?



I’m missing the skinny dipping. Okay, maybe fall’s tad to nippy for that. But a forest clearing and a blanket?





So, first month = first base. Second month = second base. Third month= third base. And now we’re in month #4?

Poor Lois. Jai was right.

Well, I’m sure ‘comfortable’ is a flexible term.

One year later: “Wait, you’ve been waiting for me?” “And you waited for me?” Just like Dune (1984)! Hope their little one won’t get killed by Nor’s troops.

Yes Lois. And you knew about this beforehand. That’s what you get for waiting.

So, combo of Clark’s skin-tight T’s and his Kryptonian uniform pants?

So, will there be a parade of family crests? The crowned stag. The three dogs on a yellow field. A green apple. A rose. A red apple. Hey, what’s that black suit with the black crest doing here? Oh, look, a flaming heart…

/waits for masses to cry out in uproar for the lack of splintered bones and open fractures/

“Kryptonian prince under wife’s spell six months after wedding! – Professional Caretaker Union considers measures.”

So, Drei. Nor. And Kal-El? In the same general area? Not good, then?

Oh dear!

It’s a *duel*! Michael

/carefully moves inside of Faraday cage because of angered FDK gods/

Michael

For the night is dark and full of terrors.

Erm, would you settle for people beating the heck out of each other?



Never read it...but...um, thanks?

Month 5-6 since wedding. Month 2-3 since Lois stopped verbally castrating him.

Krypton goes boom?

Yep, but no need to nearly kill people over it. After all, I don't see Joffery around...

Nah, that'd be too easy!

Illegal moves to be explained...Plus, he wasn't intentionally going for the crotch shot.



Plenty more coming!

Nope, no angered gods. They readily accept all offerings of feedback. And they have been busy churning out more writing, including most of chapter 21.

Plus, real life has gotten in the way. More posting as soon as I send this post.

So, it's best Lois doesn't sleep alone. Just like Stannis?

I thought Lois already came to terms with the Khal in her life?





And it's not the first time this paring happened on these boards, either!

Yes, but now she's damaged goods and not likely to earn her father a good resale price.

Speed up in posting schedule!

/considers isolated quarters for author/

More feedback after lunch.

Michael