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Well, Kal can play nice with Lois, huh? And he can relate to her on an adult level too? NOW WE ARE GETTING SOMEWHERE!

I liked the usual gentleness of Kal that showed Lois that her disposition was not something that he wished to change. As bad as it had been, and for so very long too, and he is willing to let the past go in a second. He wanted to please her and do whatever she wanted, even if it was not the same as him. It is wonderful that the two are learning to have common interests.

(And thanks for getting this here a few hours earlier than Thursday.) I am getting where I am really looking forward to this tale. Thanks so much for all your work on it.

Pat

Hi Pat!

Yup, Lois and Kal have *both* done a lot of growing up. Kal is learning all about his wife, and showing her that he doesn't ever want her to change who she is. And in return, Lois is getting to know how wonderful her husband truly is.

You're also very welcome for the slightly earlier posting. Glad that you are enjoying it.

I love it!
Well, so much for his happy wife. She’s going to awake alone and wonder what happened to him and be defensive. He’s like a little boy finally able to play with his Christmas toy!
Oooh. Kal, she *wants* you.
Pure genius!
Jor-El channeling Perry White here?
Of course, it’s nice, Lois! No place for the paparazzi to hide.
Okay, NOW Kal needs a new hobby. Hey, I’ve got an idea!
What do Proper Young Ladies do? We keep being told what they *don’t* do or *aren’t allowed* to do. What DO they do? We never see Zara around. What does Catria do when she’s not pleasing Jai (and please don’t tell me if it’s pleasing Jor-El, because I really don’t want to know THAT). They must have large thumbs from all the thumb twiddling they do.
“So, bored. Just sit there and look pretty, Lois. Don’t speak unless spoken to.” And then of course, Samm would go off and forget to talk to the poor girl. Just out of curiosity, is Krypton near Stepford?
Ooooh! Lady Lois’ Lover!
What?! Ladies aren’t even allowed to ride? Oh, Kal, she *wants* you BAD!
:rolleyes:
Well, duh! When you’ve been restricted from learning ANYTHING in your life, you jump at learning something new.
Did you jump out of Kal’s POV here or did Lois actually tell Kal that she CRAVED looking into his world?
I have to say it again. Evil genius! Oh, and Kal? Whoo-pa! <<cough>> whipped <<cough>>
Awwwwwwwwwww.

It sounds good, but all I can think is, when is the other shoe going to drop? Things sound a little *too* good.

Love that you posted a bit early....

Yay! I was hoping someone would catch the reference to that old childhood song.

<whistles innocently>

He went out back to do his Abba routine in a neon green dress...<brain flashes images of Priscilla: Queen of the Desert>

Well, the man *does* have his needs.

Exactly.



Yup. She's stubborn, but not dumb.

LOL!

Author does not claim any responsibility for those trying Lois' tactics. And also...EWWW!

Sadly, yes. <stifles urge to make bad joke about ladies and riding>

Ha!

LOL! (I think I ran out of graemlins.)

True, but she's also smart in general.

I POV jumped. Oops.

Ha!

Nah, it's all good between them now. I wasn't going to be *that* evil.

We'll definitely be seeing Lois' family again. It's mostly interaction between her and Kal, I won't lie. Glad you like the slightly earlier posting.

Chief, Metro and Kent? Very interesting names for the Royal horses!

So glad to see Kal and Lois acting like a couple rather than combatants in a contest. Lois is learning to relax and trust, while Kal is once again a happy young man. It is a relief to see.

Every time there is a scene in the rose gardens, a quiet feeling of serenity comes over the scene. Will there be more visits to this place which means so much to Kal and now Lois?

It will be very interesting to watch how Lois interacts with her family now that she's married to the Supreme Lord's son. What about Luci? Anything good coming her way or has her Father managed to sign her life over to one of Lux's sons?

Can hardly wait for the next installment!

Actually this is the song that reminds me most of your Kal and Lois: Simple Things from Camelot.

Really? Are you sure about that?

I was thinking more of an herbal smoothie. You know the kind with wheat grass.

"Wait for me, I just have to run back to my rooms for a sec, Kal."

But they have maids for that (the cleaning) and Lois isn't pregnant. You've heard the saying "idle hands make mischief" -- I'm just saying that if Krypton doesn't want a full scale female revolt to be organizaed in these womens' "spare time" they better give them something to do and quick!

Yes, but, she must have time on her hands too. Jai has other things he must do... Well, okay, maybe not, but he does have to go to family meals and work out in the gym... and take trips into town... and harass his unlucky brother. So Cat must have a few hours to herself during the day, right?

Good story, only three more whole days until the next part posts... back to writing my story, I guess.

Eeeeeeep!! Now with just a little coaxing, maybe his wife will fall in love with him?

The horse names made me giggle. lol Perry is a horse.

Great part!

I blame my muse. She's a twisted individual.

Yep. It's a good thing too, because Kal was almost down for the count!

Erm...not really, only because the gardens were sort of a conduit to get them to this point.

<whistles innocently>

Thanks! Glad you are having fun with it!

For some reason, when you initially wrote Camalot, my tired brain read it as "Spamalot" and I was like..."Um, there's no song from Spamalot that is reminsicant of Kal and Lois."

Chapter 11 tells me that he does.



"Jai! I told you to make SURE the battery was charged BEFORE you came over!"

True...but it's not all *that* important...maybe she gives lessons to other concubines?

<thinks of the women in Petyr Baelish's brothels in Game of Thrones>

Glad you like it! Sorry to force you to work on yours though.

Glad you like it! Perry will actually be around...later. The horse names made me giggle too when my muse wrote them.

Will Lois fall in love with Kal? You'll find out on Sunday.

‘Hers’, not ‘His’

Danger! Danger! Danger!



Ching! Are you implying a happy ending?

“…not go to bed angry?”

Kal, Kal, Kal. To Jai, that registers as “…consumate?”

Wine?

And he’s not worried about her being a clone, *at all*? /hands Kal LnC Seasons 1-3 and gets popcorn/

So, he’d better not consummate, then?

Ching!

Oh dear. And yes, he has.



Did she use the blow drier in the shower, *again*?

Oh ,there it comes…

Code for visiting Chataya’s.

Oh dear. He just admitted he stiffed her the first time.

So, first they get to do what Her Lord Husband wants, then she gets to suggest something for his consideration?

Michael

Vicki,

They have said it all.

Delightful story.

Looking for the next installment.

Very nice chapter. However, I'm really curious as to what is going to happen to fill the next twelve or so chapters. Lex kidnaps Lois? Lois has to take care of her parents' estate because her father suddenly died? Nor starts a war that leaves a strain on the El family (by probably killing Jor-El and Ching, with Zara pregnant and Kal being the regent for his unborn nephew)?

Oh, and for those who run out of graemlins, there is a whole site full of them - and you can use as many as you want. (I think...)

ETA: Click graemlin for link...

Not gonna touch that one. At all.

You mean, bust a pillow in sexual frustration, right?

Or buy an air mattress.



<red lights flash and an alarm shrieks>

And I do love facepalm bear.

<whistles innocently>

See above.

Laced with mood enhancers?



Not if he wants to keep all of his parts in working order?

<snicker>

"Tyrion says 'Hi,' by the way."

Nah, she's just made it into the super-secret club, that's all.

Maaaaaaybe.





"No, I have no idea how he managed to fall face first into the water and not save himself."

But only on nights when both moons are full.

Oh dear. <offers medication to help with the withdrawal symptoms, and wonders what will happen when this story is finished>

Thanks so much, Ken. Less than 48 hours to go for the next part!

Ooh! Excellent site, thanks!



Lots of stuff to come in the next chapters. Some good, some not. I don't want to spoil it.

And there is a *slight* chance that this may go to 21 chapters.

Those darn characters! Mine never do what I want either! You tell them left at the Lex Luthor, but NO! they want to plow right into him.

/Pst. Lara Joelle Kent! You are evil! That site is TOOOO addicting!

This happens almost every single time I let my muse run amok on her own, unsupervised. Granted, it usually works out for the better...

I was going for the push-ups, giving Lois an eye-full.

/imagines Kal going

Jor-El should probably watch his back...

I thought you aren't supposed to mix alcohol and drugs?

Indeed.

Umm...what do you mean 'finished'?
.
.
.
Duh! You mean, when you start posting the sequel about their honeymoon roadtrip where Kal and Lois visit Earth.

Michael

I know you were.

Oh look! He bought some armor!

<whistles innocently>

As in...no more.

Hadn't planned on one. But you never know what my muse might come up with next.

Michael

Yes! Endless gremlins! A perfect way to waste my time! These are for you, Lara.


On to the story!
/imagines a high stakes risk game where Kal and his brothers are literally taking over planets/
Suddenly, the halls are full of people singing oddly Disney-like songs as Kal sings about his feelings.
Why, yes. Yes she could.
Just remember that when you find out Lois heard you crying to your mommy the night before.
Nooooooooo!

"Something called makeup sex. I don't know. Lois seemed to like it."
I'm sure that didn't make her happy. Having to do all the work. Perfect!
Lois wants to ride Kent! Oh, the freudian irony!

Aaaawwwwwww!!!
Great chapter! Can't wait for more on Sunday!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! That was so sweet. Nice job. I am looking forward to more. Laura

<chokes on tea>



Oh lord, Kal really *has* been reading from the Necronomicon again.

<arms the palace staff with chainsaws and "boomsticks.">

<author is responible for all evil thoughts running through the readers' heads>

Thank you! I'm really looking forward to getting the next chapter up, to be perfectly honest.

Thanks so much, Laura! I hope you enjoy the next chapter just as much. I really loved writing that one.

I was out of town for one week and now I have 3 chapters to read. WONDERFUL!

That part was so sweet : Lois and Kal are falling for each other ... and Fasa was here.

And my favorite quote:

Very funny

And now the next part

Hey! Thanks! Lucky you with so many chapters to read all at once.