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Posted By: Mouserocks FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 02:19 PM
Comments, please! What do you think the prank is going to be?

Oh, and I think I forgot to mention this in the author's note, but credits for the title go to AngelFinally. I read it and couldn't stop rotflol ... so I had no choice but to use it. Thanks!

Edit: Forgot to mention this- takes place mid to late season 2. laugh
Posted By: Lynn S. M. Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 02:42 PM
rotflol

I can't wait for part two!

You have the characters' voices down pat.

And AngelFinally, that title is perfect.

Joy,
Lynn

p.s., I hope you won't be pranking us by withholding part two until April 2nd. wink
Posted By: Deadly Chakram Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 03:01 PM
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Prank You Very Much
Perfect title!

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Clark frowned in confusion. "Uh, what are you up to?" Lois' facade slipped for a moment as panic flashed through her eyes. Clark suddenly grew very nervous. "Lois? Lois, is everything all right?"
So, she's plotting against him? Or working on her novel?

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She merely brushed it off. "Fine, Clark. Everything's fine. Geez, why has everyone been so darn curious today?"
Here's where you feed her chocolate and coffee, Clark.

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Lois bit her lip nervously. "Promise you won't tell anyone? Anyone at all? Not Perry or Jimmy or even Superman?"
Ah, so we're in Season 1 or 2.

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Of course, he was not oblivious to the irony of that statement, and knew just how hypocritical he was. He had to tell her, and soon, but timing was everything, and Clark just didn't know when it--
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"They're... prank ideas? That's what all of the fuss is about?"
Oooh! clap clap Hmmm...does she know/suspect and *that* is the actual prank?

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Even my parents.
Now *that* would be fun too.

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Clark finally allowed himself to chuckle at her behavior as he booted up his computer and thought about just what he could do to turn the tables on his girlfriend.
Wait...is *this* the prank? Making us wait in suspense? Ack!

More now please! grovel
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 03:03 PM
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Posted By: VirginiaR Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 04:12 PM
My, oh, my... Lois is walking herself into a bad situation, isn't she? Or does she know and she's going to prank Clark into revealing himself to her? Can't wait! thumbsup
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 04:15 PM
Originally posted by Deadly Chackram:
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Here's where you feed her chocolate and coffee, Clark.
Usually that's the case. But not this time.
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Ah, so we're in Season 1 or 2.
Season 2. (see edit above)
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Nice banter. A+!
Thank you. blush
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<pictures Lois as Megamind>
evil I won't say.
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Now *that* would be fun too.
I toyed with the idea of messing with the Kents. But I went with this.
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Wait...is *this* the prank? Making us wait in suspense? Ack!
devil You've caught me. More to come tomorrow though!
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 04:17 PM
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Originally posted by VirginiaR:
My, oh, my... Lois is walking herself into a bad situation, isn't she? Or does she know and she's going to prank Clark into revealing himself to her? Can't wait! thumbsup
Glad you're enjoying it so far! Hope you're not disappointed... but it will be unexpected, that's for sure. And yes. Bad situation. For both of them. evil
Posted By: MrsLuthor Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 04:57 PM
Oh boy! This isn't going to be pretty! Great start & I can't wait for more!
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 03/31/12 05:11 PM
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Originally posted by MrsLuthor:
Oh boy! This isn't going to be pretty! Great start & I can't wait for more!
Thanks! More will come tomorrow, don't worry! And yes. Things will get ugly. laugh
Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/03/12 01:40 PM
Ooooooh!
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and she promptly minimized the document on her screen and spun around in her chair with a forced smile. "Yes?"
/squints eyes/

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"Fine, Clark. Everything's fine. Geez, why has everyone been so darn curious today?"
Subtle. Very subtle.

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"Promise you won't tell anyone? Anyone at all? Not Perry or Jimmy or even Superman?"
wave Michael
Posted By: Lois_Lane_Fan Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/03/12 01:59 PM
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"O-kay," he dragged out the syllables. "But only if it's not something terrible I'm going to need to actually go to Superman or the police about."
laugh You never know, Clark.

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"April 1st... Oh."
So, who does Lois want to prank?

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"Yes, but they're for everybody. See- Perry, Jimmy, Ralph..."
So, she plans on pranking the whole newspaper. rotflol I wonder if she'll get Clark, too. Or, if somebody will end up getting her.


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SUPERMAN
She even wants to prank Superman! rotflol

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Clark finally allowed himself to chuckle at her behavior as he booted up his computer and thought about just what he could do to turn the tables on his girlfriend. [/QB]
This is getting good! I can't wait to see if Lois somehow successfully gets Superman or if Clark turns the tables on her!

Unfortunately, I'll have to wait to read part two because I'm busy right now. frown
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/03/12 02:30 PM
Hey Michael! wave
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Subtle. Very subtle.
No one ever said subtlety was her strong suit.
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/imagines Glory from Buffy Season 5/
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So, Season 2, then.
Yup.

Glad you enjoyed, Michael!
Posted By: Mouserocks Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/03/12 02:36 PM
Originally posted by Lois_Lane_Fan:
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You never know, Clark.
Too true. In fact, knowing Lois, that fear is probably instilled in him.
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So, who does Lois want to prank?
This is Lois we're talking about. Who doesn't she want to prank? Overachiever. :rolleyes:
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So, she plans on pranking the whole newsppaper. I wonder if she'll get Clark, too. Or, if somebody will end up getting her.
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Posted By: Darth Michael Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/04/12 02:00 PM
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You know, Teri would make a fantastic Bond villain (she's already done the Bond girl part). Move over, Pussy Galore. It's Mad Dog Lane.
Well, we do have to decide: Teri's Lois or Lois's Lois as the villain?

wave Michael
Posted By: AngelFinally Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/08/12 10:47 AM
It looks great, Mouserocks! I can't believe you used the cheesiest title I suggested, but I'm glad you liked it! All the fun feedback is so great to read! I was truly honored to be a part of your creative process and I think your story turned out fabulous! How could it not?
Posted By: Olive Re: FDK: Prank You Very Much (1/2) - 04/09/12 07:23 AM
Great 1st part! I'm curious about the pranks Lois is going to pull, especially the one on Superman.

The title is awesome goofy

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"Fine! Stick in the mud," Lois huffed in indignation. "Just stay out of my way. I never even needed your help. I can handle it myself," she ended up muttering under her breath. Clark finally allowed himself to chuckle at her behavior as he booted up his computer and thought about just what he could do to turn the tables on his girlfriend.
I like this annoyed Lois and plotting Clark. Endless possibilities for the next part with this ending!

Wonderful work, Mouserocks!!
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