Well, that about says it.

This was very clever; I like the premise. Why didn't anyone ever think of that? Clearly a "duh" moment.

I also like your style. Very funny writing. I *loved* the "Lois Lane was onto something" parallel lines.

Well done!

Welcome to the boards (you are new, right?).

- Vicki

Hi,

Cute story.

She sometime scare me. :rolleyes:

MAF

Cute story.

Tank (who says that this fic is just more proof that Lois is the brains of the outfit)

thank you. Yes, I am new to the boards, though not new to the fandom, even though I am just returned after having taken a four year break. I have only written two other LnC fics, one of which I wrote when I was sixteen, and is terrible, and the other of which I am about to post in five minutes. Hope you enjoy it too.

Loved it ! Very cute and clever. A refreshing read and i look forward to more from you.

lol

P.S. Welcome to the Nuthouse.. I mean the boards

That was great... so funny.
~Lauren

Just read "Finish" before this one. Both very fantastic! Short, but with impact.

I look forward to reading more stories from you.


metwin1

PS: Can you use the blue arrow when you post new stories? I almost missed both gems within all the comment folders.

Lucy
nice story
cute and funny
merry

Lucy

A great premise! Very clever!

Tricia