FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/19/12 05:00 PM
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I'll try to have the final part up within a couple of days.
Corrina.
I'll try to have the final part up within a couple of days.
Corrina.
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/19/12 09:51 PM
Holy crap! What a twisted chapter! Wow poor clark. they will have to go back and undo Clarks injection. But I have a feeing you want to torture us a bit first. More soon. laura
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/20/12 03:11 PM
I'm lost for words! OK, so Paul did turn out to be Tempus, but that ending!!! Wow! Didn't expect that. You sure don't pull any punches! I am so keen to see how you are going to sort that in the next part that I keep coming back to check if it has been posted yet.
Wonderful writing as usual Corrina!
Cheers
Elizabeth
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/21/12 03:57 PM
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"What did you do? On a Saturday afternoon? In 1985?"
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Easy. Quick. Safe."
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"Probably training," Clark said.
"Perfect," Lois said enthusiastically. "Will you take me?"
"Perfect," Lois said enthusiastically. "Will you take me?"
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"You expect me to stand next to you while you ogle some young buck playing football?"
Michael
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/23/12 09:11 PM
ACK!
So many changes to the timeline...Lois and Clark have changed things that Tempus couldn't possibly have accounted for. So that gives me hope. But that doesn't mean I can be any more patient for the next part!
Amber
So many changes to the timeline...Lois and Clark have changed things that Tempus couldn't possibly have accounted for. So that gives me hope. But that doesn't mean I can be any more patient for the next part!
Amber
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/24/12 07:37 PM
waiting!!
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/26/12 05:35 AM
I have been working on the final part, but I'm still not entirely happy with it.
Sorry for the delay - it shouldn't be too much longer.
Corrina.
Sorry for the delay - it shouldn't be too much longer.
Corrina.
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 03/26/12 08:49 AM
Oh wow! So many surprises. I didn't see any of that coming. Can't wait to see how they get themselves out of this and who shot Tempus?
Jackie
Jackie
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 15/16 - 04/07/12 11:46 PM
Wow, what a surprising part! I love that Lois wanted to see young Clark, that she got to cheer him up and encourage him a bit--a very well done bit of parallel writing there--but from then on, my eyes just kept getting wider and wider.
So Tempus was Paul, but I was a bit confused as to why Lois didn't recognize him as Paul. Have her memories already started to change, was whatever allowed him to look like Paul wearing off, or is it just that he's so clearly a different person even with the outward guise of Paul?
How terrifying to hear Tempus spell out a future of two Clarks and one Lois (I knew he'd go for something more than a gun and a bullet). It made chills run through me. The way he pulled out the Kryptonite the first time was so casual that I knew he must have something more planned, but some kind of red Kryptonite potion? I'm terrified for what comes next. Will this altered Clark be wrapped up in the next part, or will it be the plot of the next story in this series?
Can't wait to see what happens next!
So Tempus was Paul, but I was a bit confused as to why Lois didn't recognize him as Paul. Have her memories already started to change, was whatever allowed him to look like Paul wearing off, or is it just that he's so clearly a different person even with the outward guise of Paul?
How terrifying to hear Tempus spell out a future of two Clarks and one Lois (I knew he'd go for something more than a gun and a bullet). It made chills run through me. The way he pulled out the Kryptonite the first time was so casual that I knew he must have something more planned, but some kind of red Kryptonite potion? I'm terrified for what comes next. Will this altered Clark be wrapped up in the next part, or will it be the plot of the next story in this series?
Can't wait to see what happens next!