FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 07:30 AM
Okay, nice cliffhanger!! :p
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Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 08:30 AM
Good instalment.
Nice bouts of introspection with both our primarys.
This Lois immpersonator seems a little sharper than the one who showed up on the series.
Will they actually talk? Will Clark/Superman believe Lois when she tells him that it wasn't her at the rally? Will the gentle readers string up the gentle writer if she doesn't follow this up quickly enough?
Good cliff hanger, but only if it is followed up by the next part reasonably quickly.
Tank (who always wondered why Clark wouldn't believe Lois in the show given what he knew about her feelings for Superman)
Nice bouts of introspection with both our primarys.
This Lois immpersonator seems a little sharper than the one who showed up on the series.
Will they actually talk? Will Clark/Superman believe Lois when she tells him that it wasn't her at the rally? Will the gentle readers string up the gentle writer if she doesn't follow this up quickly enough?
Good cliff hanger, but only if it is followed up by the next part reasonably quickly.
Tank (who always wondered why Clark wouldn't believe Lois in the show given what he knew about her feelings for Superman)
Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 09:15 AM
Sorry I haven't posted on the last couple of instalments, Sara, but I'm still reading this and still enjoying it very much indeed. Poor Clark! I know you wanted me to say that Clark deserved all he got in this story, 
but I can't help but feel sorry for him, especially after what he thinks Lois thinks of him. 
Though now, like it or not, Lois and Superman are face to face. So I assume Clark will find out that Lois wasn't the one badmouthing him?
Lots of lovely angst... keep it coming, but let them talk soon!!
Wendy
but I can't help but feel sorry for him, especially after what he thinks Lois thinks of him. Though now, like it or not, Lois and Superman are face to face. So I assume Clark will find out that Lois wasn't the one badmouthing him?
Lots of lovely angst... keep it coming, but let them talk soon!!
Wendy
Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 02:46 PM
Hi,
Great part.
You are
Great part.
You are
Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 03:10 PM
Sara,
great part
I hate cliffhangers
merry
great part
I hate cliffhangers
merry
Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 03:47 PM
OMG, what happened?
And even more important, what's going to happen now?
Just wanted to let you know that I loved this line. Don't know exactly why, but it somehow touched me. 
Post more, very soon, please
Julia
And even more important, what's going to happen now?
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He had behaved completely differently in both guises. He had been clever. He had been smart. He had been deceitful. He had been dishonest. He had lied.
Post more, very soon, please
Julia
Re: FDK-Unfinished Business 10/? - 01/18/04 10:03 PM
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“Remember a couple of years back, when I did some research into our family tree and discovered that our great-great-grandmother died from a fatal infection called endocarditis? Inflammation of the heart?”
“Yeah?”
“I think I have it.” Lois wound the phone cord round and round her finger. That was sappy, but it came closest to describing what she felt.
“Yeah?”
“I think I have it.” Lois wound the phone cord round and round her finger. That was sappy, but it came closest to describing what she felt.
I haven't quoted back anything in a while, but this seemed completely necessary. This was an awesome part, and I'm very anxious to read the next part where Clark and Lois finally talk (or at least they had better talk).
Waiting in high-strung anticipation,
Jo
