FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 01/29/12 04:55 AM
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Corrina.
Corrina.
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 01/29/12 09:18 AM
Loving it so far. I am so glad you decided that Lois and Clark should have each other through this hard time. I can't wait to see how they are going to go about it. laura
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 01/29/12 12:28 PM
That was an awesome chapter; really enjoying the story.
You have set up everything nicely for an awesome adventure ahead. Can't wait to read the next part!
Cheers
Elizabeth
You have set up everything nicely for an awesome adventure ahead. Can't wait to read the next part!
Cheers
Elizabeth
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 01/30/12 02:51 PM
Ooooooh! Update!
Oh Clark… /shakes head/
Michael, who’s now waiting patiently for the much hinted at bodily transference, a.k.a. body swapping.
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"You ... er... you didn't recognise her voice?" Clark asked.
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"Then where are we?"
"1985."
"1985."
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"Maybe Tempus sent him to the future," Lois said. "But wherever he is, I bet he's one very angry editor. He didn't like being pushed around by anyone."
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I'm longing for a shower. Want to come with me?"
"Ah ... " Clark picked up the copy of The Daily Planet. "I've been intending to read this - catch up on 1985."
"Sure?"
No, he wasn't. But ... "I showered earlier."
"Ah ... " Clark picked up the copy of The Daily Planet. "I've been intending to read this - catch up on 1985."
"Sure?"
No, he wasn't. But ... "I showered earlier."
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But none of that had been enough to dissolve the heavy burden of guilt that had solidified in his gut during the long hours as he had watched her slide to her death.
Michael, who’s now waiting patiently for the much hinted at bodily transference, a.k.a. body swapping.
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 01/31/12 09:30 PM
Oooh love it. Can't wait to see what happens during this meeting with Paul/Tempus. So glad Lois is awake and remembers their lives together.
Jackie
Jackie
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 02/21/12 12:54 AM
Laura You bring up a crucial point - Lois and Clark together. 
Elizabeth Thanks for the comment.
Yeah. Setting up ... I can't really say anything else without giving too much away.
Michael
Hold that thought.
Jackie
You think Tempus might be Paul? Interesting.
Thanks for commenting
Corrina.
Elizabeth Thanks for the comment.
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You have set up
Michael
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/imagines Paul stuck in the Utopian Insane Asylum./
Jackie
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Can't wait to see what happens during this meeting with Paul/Tempus.
Thanks for commenting
Corrina.
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 02/21/12 07:37 PM
WOW! This is definitely my favorite chapter! I love the interaction between Lois and Clark--love Clark's worry for her and his characteristic fear that it's all his fault and his terror that she'll slip away again. And I love Lois's amazing adaptability, her strength to reassure and encourage Superman.
So many of the phrases and lines were just beautiful through here. I particularly liked the metaphor of her death being like a curtain that fell over life, and his simple answer to her question about whether he'd thought it was the end: 'You'd died.' For Clark, that is enough of an answer.
Maybe my favorite part was when Lois showed just how great their love was--surviving no matter what separated them. And of course his reply--he had gotten her killed. Two very different views, but we all know which one's more right!
Loved this chapter! Thanks!
So many of the phrases and lines were just beautiful through here. I particularly liked the metaphor of her death being like a curtain that fell over life, and his simple answer to her question about whether he'd thought it was the end: 'You'd died.' For Clark, that is enough of an answer.
Maybe my favorite part was when Lois showed just how great their love was--surviving no matter what separated them. And of course his reply--he had gotten her killed. Two very different views, but we all know which one's more right!
Loved this chapter! Thanks!
Re: FDK - Time to Love 5: Led Astray 6/? - 02/27/12 04:40 PM
AntiK
Your comment goes to the essence of their relationship - Clark worried and willing to do anything for Lois, Lois strong and adaptable. With him having superpowers, I think this paradox is one of the things that keeps us writing about Lois and Clark.
We really need a 'walks away whistling innocently' graemlin!
Thanks for the comments,
Corrina.
Your comment goes to the essence of their relationship - Clark worried and willing to do anything for Lois, Lois strong and adaptable. With him having superpowers, I think this paradox is one of the things that keeps us writing about Lois and Clark.
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And I just know that our Lois and young Lois are going to end up meeting eventually
Thanks for the comments,
Corrina.