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Posted By: ChaaBreh FDK - The Girl's Not Attractive - Part 29/? - 12/16/11 08:57 PM
Hi everyone, this chapter may be a little short, but it motivates me to keep writing when I can at least post a little bit more.

Comments, feedback appreciated!
Oooh, fun!

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it strived to bring patrons back in time to the Gold Rush era, where "men were men and women were (at least looked like) women".
/imagines the female patrons looking like Annie Oakley/

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It was hard to believe that a person of his means was so highly motivated to fight crime in his "spare" time.
Hey, everybody needs hobby.

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I'm sorry to see that you've developed such low self-esteem.
goofy

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Not only are there a near army of clones of you, .”
Oh boy.
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it appears that some of them may have Clark’s superpowers as well.”
Oh boy. Oh boy.

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“She’s thinner than me – and what is that outfit she has on?”
Concubine paint?

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They had seemingly lost their ability to fly
Huh.

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“There’s at least ten of them! What kind of a sick madman would do this?”
He likes it menage-au-onze style?

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“Too late,” said a familiar voice that flew in through the open patio door.
Oh boy.

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It’s going to be a long night as it is,” he suggested, resigning himself to the fact that he wouldn’t get too far arguing with his new Kryptonian friend.
Not as long as Lois is there…

wave Michael
Yep. Thin clones. Well, luckily, Batman is also a master of disguise.... And, it's easier to make someone look heavuer than it is to make than look thin. smile thanks for the feedback Michael.
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And, it's easier to make someone look heavuer than it is to make than look thin.
True, but once Clois gets naked, the gig would be up, wouldn't it?

Michael
True. Well let's hope that doesn't happen! Hmmm. How do you merge Lois and Lex. LoLex? LexLo?

As long as we don't see BruLo. smile

Looks like we might see Chlick for sure.

I'm killing myself. I should be writing instead of making very bad jokes, right? I mean write? smile smile
Phew! I feel better about Lois and Clark's future now. I hadn't been able to sleep last night after reading Part 24. evil )

I'm glad Lois has confessed all to Bruce. She needed someone to talk about the jump
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