FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/12/11 10:06 AM
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/12/11 12:07 PM
Just catching this story now. Cute. LOL she had to Pee. I bet!
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/12/11 02:31 PM
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Lex’s laughter was uncontrolled now. “And he’s a virgin!”
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He belongs to me now.
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Virginity does make sense given his powers. Wouldn’t want him to tear you in half in his excitement.
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Her inner voice’s gnashing teeth in anger sounded like swords clashing and felt more like a demon wishing to free itself from her corporeal body just to tear Luthor in two.
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Lois glowered at Lex, kicking up her leg and knocking into Luthor’s hand, which held the globe. The sphere flew through the air, Joe-El’s voice cutting off at the lack of touch, but instead of falling, the globe levitated above Luthor’s head.
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“Now look what you’ve done!” Lex snapped. He jumped up, trying to grab it, but every time he did the globe shifted its position to remain out of his reach.
Michael
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/12/11 04:28 PM
Ching?! Flying off in front of everybody? Did he meet Lois? I suppose he must not have, just went and grabbed the globe and maybe dropped it off at her place?
And the ending...
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/13/11 10:27 PM
Laurach: Hope your back feels better. Glad you are enjoying my bit of fluff story. I like to end a Part with either a cliffy or a funny. This was definitely one of those latter points. And can we all say, "Clark!" ? :rolleyes: (for his assumptions)
Michael: <edit> What? No
Thank you, no.
Okay, a little more fun.
Interesting theory. I haven't heard of the telepathic globe theory though. Would explain a lot.
No? I thought we couldn't have Lois rooting for anyone's death. Isn't that why we have Ivy? 
Sometime before the dust settles in or her bladder breaks... yes. Nigel & Mrs. Cox, Nah.
Liked that description of Clark.
5, right?
Well, he does know... just like he did on the show.
That's some super hearing you've got there, Clark... Not only can you hear well... you can hear 'a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...' He's not Kryptonian, he's a Jedi!
Ching didn't say Lois was alive, only that he left the globe with her.
She's gagged. And he didn't care.
Do I want to know?
Unless of course, you're interested in reading the 11+ Parts of the sequel...
I thought someone had quoted this line in FDK, sorry. otherwise would have explained in 32. Which teenagers do we know that have a vendetta against Luthor?
Michael: <edit> What? No
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And a vignette on the dark side of the boards that deals with a now slightly damaged Lex who fancied himself in love with Superman.
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Oooooo, a globe and a balcony. Lex wouldn't commit suicide, now would he? Or, given that they teeped earlier and some say the globe's telepathic, might Ivy actually be controlling the globe and use it to send Lex into the afterlife?
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*Looo-isssss*, no saving the nasty gangster boss and kidnapper who knows Superman's secret and his secret identity.
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Yes, but he will still find her. Eventually, right? Or would Nigel or Mrs. Cox rather get rid of the evidence?
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Apparently not. After all, Mr OCD did find it.
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Obi Wan Quote
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Wonder if Clark will put two and two together now. Or if he's going to try and figure out how he fathered a kid when he was just a year old or so.
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Henderson knows? And I'm still not convinced about Jack.
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No, that was Alderaan.
That's some super hearing you've got there, Clark... Not only can you hear well... you can hear 'a long time ago, in a galaxy far, far away...' He's not Kryptonian, he's a Jedi!Quote
Ching already said as much?
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She's fallen asleep after all the excitement and within a few minutes of meeting Ching? And why did she not ask him to carry her downstairs? Chain of evidence?
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Go for little hostages?
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*yay*, fun! And now, 4 parts to wrap it up?
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Apparently, it has become an urban ritual for teenagers to call 9-1-1 and pretend to be a victim locked in Luthor’s penthouse.
otherwise would have explained in 32. Which teenagers do we know that have a vendetta against Luthor?
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/13/11 10:29 PM
MouseRocks: You pictured a different ending for Lex?
I'm dying of curiousity to know what your guess was. 
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Interesting that you killed off Lex. Very clever way, too. I liked it. Not to sound weird or anything... but I was expecting something else, so this was good
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/15/11 09:18 AM
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Where's the fun in that? [Huh] Thank you, no.
But for LnC fanfic, it's more of a guide of where not to go 
Michael
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/15/11 11:32 AM
Michael: Jack.
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Okay, that was too subtle. That was flat out George RR Martin subtle.
Re: FDK - Green-Eyed Monster (33/37) - 10/15/11 12:05 PM
Yeah. I just didn't get put it together from the story itself Michael