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Aww that was beautiful. I always thought Clark should have told her when she came over to see him to tell him she chose him. I like her reaction better than in the series as well. If he would have told her at this point, it makes sense that she wouldn't be upset with him. They weren't even officially together yet. Great job!

Thank you very much! This was a lot of fun to write. I'm polishing the one I write for Lois in response to the challenge as we speak.

Wonderful story very well done

Thanks so much!

Truly Awesome! Great story!

Artemis

Thank you Artemis!

Brava! A perfect rewrite of the scene- always thought that Lois deserved better here, deserved to know the truth. And another great example of the name game competition!

Thanks so much, Mouse! I mean, I understand just why the show handled it the way they did, but it would have been nice for Clark to tell her earlier.

Well done! Two thumbs way up!

Aww! Thanks so much HappyGirl!

Lovely lovely job!! Clark said so much yet only said one word-- Wonderfully done!

Thank you, Evelyn!