Missing Lois - TOC

Thank you so much to my Beta Readers! My story is more well rounded because of your imput. Thank you. for the next week. Please expect the first part of Chapter 5 to appear around July 15th. And, yes, that total above (109) seems to be the correct number of parts after my last count. Feel free to double check my math at my TOC page where I already have all the chapters and parts listed.

As always, please post feedback here.

I posted in the wrong place! sorry. this was wow! She is a fast one! Interesting. More soon. Laura

This has been a compelling and interesting story so far.

With the rescue of altLois everything changes from the direction I had originally thought it might take.

Looking forward to more.

Tank (who hopes the altLois will have time to get her hair trimmed to a more suitable Lois style)

I had to laugh and laugh at this line.

Laura: Yes, alt-Lois is not canon Lois. She's had different life experiences that for some reason made her go off in the different direction than canon Lois. But her heart, her true self, is edited for possible spoilage as we will eventually see.

Tank: Yes, alt-Lois will be getting a haircut, not soon, but Edited Spoiler info eventually. Enough of a spoiler, I think.

Iolanthe: It makes their 'marriage' a bit more legit, too.

I like the backstory you've created as to why Lois got involved with Luther. Deception and extreme circumstances would have to be involved.

Great to have alt-Lois and alt-Clark together!

Joan

Awwwwww and

So, Lex Jr. had watched Lois in the shower? And watched his naked Daddy from Lois's POV? Eeewwwww!

Hmm... Actually, he did.

She really doesn't know.

And definitely meow.



Hmm... Clever tactic. And considering later: Duh! /slaps head/

Actually, the 'Thank you' is only requisite with the better mannered gentlemen. But I'm sure Clark Kent would send her a gift-basket and a 'thank-you' card.

Awwwww

It did work for Lex. Although, he likely knew and didn't care. After all, where would she go.

Oh, so she only goes after the unattached ones?

So, very short honeymoon? Since she vanished only three or so months before Clark started.

Does Lex have Kryptonite?

Wow, she's getting cozy fast!



Michael

Joan: I must thank MozartMaid for the inclusion of Alt-Lois's backstory. Originally, I was just going to drip and drab it bit by bit into the story. MM insisted I tell it upfront.

Michael: Bring on Alt-Lois. Yes, that's one of my favorite lines in all of ML, too. No Dark Side of ML. Sometimes one's imagination is more creative than words on a screen.

Yep. OTOH, Lex might just have an accident, dropping out of mid-air.

Huh. I didn't know she knew?

Wealthy. Cultured. Un-wed. Michael